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Like a raindrop on a window,
Glistening in the sun,
A reflection of the pain inside.

Feeling alone, tears fall,
As if from nowhere, the flood gates open.
Tiny droplets of sadness.
The dont show the overpowering waterfall inside.

Twinkling like the stars,
Slipping over the wrinkles.
Light, soft, blinking...

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Diamond Tears

Contributed by diamond_tears on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

One tear rolls down a cheek,
Like a raindrop on a window,
Glistening in the sun,
A reflection of the pain inside.

Feeling alone, tears fall,
As if from nowhere, the flood gates open.
Tiny droplets of sadness.
The dont show the overpowering waterfall inside.

Twinkling like the stars,
Slipping over the wrinkles.
Light, soft, blinking...

Diamond Tears

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Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:04:57 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that you feel like this, but this was a really good poem though.

~Brittany~

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:25:36 PM AEST
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The imagery beautiful. Although sad it pulls at the heart and you have lots of talent.

I'm impressed and will look for your writes in the future.

Kie

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:37:33 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I think I'm becoming a fan of urs here... very beautiful and very expressive again... keep writing... one day maybe u'll be able to not cry those expensive tears ur crying... LOL I'm sorry for ur pain... wish there was something I could do or say...
I'll just pray...
~Donna~

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:42:06 PM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love, nessa

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:01:37 PM AEST
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I love, absolutely love poems about tears. And this was beautiful. The imagery used was magnificent and it radiated pain and sadness at the same time.
'Tiny droplets of sadness.
The dont show the overpowering waterfall inside.' I loved that line. Great write.

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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this was beautiful but Im sorry for your pain seems to be going around of late..........

hugs

Michelle

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:11:03 PM AEST
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Very beautifully written,

Kisses,
~Soulless~

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by surfer_boy_lost on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:06:43 AM AEST
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So evocative, i think many people will be able to identify with you through this.

Re: Diamond Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:02:36 PM AEST
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Awsome. That was really good. I'll checvk out more later.

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