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Note To Mrs. Spence.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:52:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sadness consumes me,
Into a great mass of destruction.
Until the point where I flame to anger.
Then people start for the reaction,
And I blow, with great eruption!
Through-out the months building up,
I write my inside picture.
But when more poison is brought forth,
I get broken, into a, swelling mixture.
Then it flows out of me,
My, ‘burning, eye, acid’.
It leaves my vision blurred,
With cloudy, flowing, liquid.
I’d be wrong to lie,
I’m so ***** scared!
I’m drifting in emotion,
So under-prepared!
So what happens next?
I don’t know!
I ain’t some fortune teller.
And that you should know!
I don't start for no reason.
I always try to hold it in.
Frustration is my curse,
But don’t act like its some ***** sin!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-04-27 12:52:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Note To Mrs. Spence.
(User Rating: 1 ) by aboutdesouffle on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:16:09 PM AEST (User
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Isn't it just awful when no one comments on your poem. I thought this was a very true portrayal of your feelings. Well done, kiddo! |
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Re: Note To Mrs. Spence.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tinkkerbelle on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:23:39 PM AEST (User
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Very true portrayal of your feelings. |
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Re: Note To Mrs. Spence.
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:00:48 AM AEST (User
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you were very brave to share your
feelings, thanks.
hope things work out for you. |
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