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Alone
Contributed by
Tripod
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:32:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I just want to hold you,
and never let go.
I'm afraid you'll walk away,
and leave me here alone.
I hate being stranded.
I'm lost without you.
I don't want to spend another night,
seperated from you.
Everything inside of my mind,
opposes me it seems.
And though my heart feels torn apart,
help wake me from my dreams.
I've grown so insensitive
so used to your lies,
Yet I know I can't live
being decieved by your eyes.
The answer evades me,
just out of reach it seems.
No matter how hard I struggle,
the pain inside still screams.
And as you walk from here,
you look just like a queen.
Please return and stay this time,
I need your love to intervene.
Copyright ©
Tripod
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2004-04-27 11:32:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:22:04 PM AEST (User
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This is a great piece! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:24:14 PM AEST (User
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Good Poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:18:35 AM AEST (User
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what can i say, i liked it a lot! very moving! you'v got a lot of love & feelings there that this girl deserves to know about....for how do you know she may not return your feelings! Seize the moment & go for it, you never know you might be nicely surprised! All the same interesting read & thanks for sharing it!
Club Member > FlawlessDumy |
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