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Array ( [sid] => 45012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not [time] => 2004-04-27 02:21:48 [hometext] => This poem is about loving someone who loves another. [bodytext] => She loves me
She says
But I feel so lost
And I'm trying to wait for her
But at my own cost?

She loves him too
And this kills me inside
I try to bite my tongue
But my jealous need I can't hide

And she just can't decide
No she just can't decide
But in this limbo of time
I'm left to wither and die

She loves me not
No chance left for me
I'm sure my hope is false
And my pride cannot see

She loves me
Please let this be
She loves me not
And I just do not see

So the pedals fall away
And they are ripped one by one
Desperately, hopefully watching
Put my faith in our love

My faith in..

She loves me
She loves me not
She loves [comments] => 4 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lostinlimbo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not

Contributed by lostinlimbo on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She loves me
She says
But I feel so lost
And I'm trying to wait for her
But at my own cost?

She loves him too
And this kills me inside
I try to bite my tongue
But my jealous need I can't hide

And she just can't decide
No she just can't decide
But in this limbo of time
I'm left to wither and die

She loves me not
No chance left for me
I'm sure my hope is false
And my pride cannot see

She loves me
Please let this be
She loves me not
And I just do not see

So the pedals fall away
And they are ripped one by one
Desperately, hopefully watching
Put my faith in our love

My faith in..

She loves me
She loves me not
She loves

Copyright © lostinlimbo ... [ 2004-04-27 02:21:48]
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Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:55:50 AM AEST
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What a journey you took my mind on with this poem. Painful.

A very unique poem and I liked the way you constructed it.

Kie

Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:59:33 AM AEST
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heartbreaking poem
very nicely written

Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:36:57 PM AEST
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Aww, that's really sad. It was really well writen though. Nice piece.
Katie

Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenHeartedLass on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:21:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. She is stupid to not love you. You're just easy to love,

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