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Array ( [sid] => 45004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Morning Roses [time] => 2004-04-27 00:20:34 [hometext] => My mom told me she and my dad were getting a divorce just a couple of days ago... [bodytext] => Every 'vow' you made,
you say was a mistake,
he'd bring you roses in the morning,
they're plastic and fake,
was the scent of love flowers,
ever real,
wither and die away,
now i know how they feel,

hang the roses to dry,
so forever they'll last,
press them in a book,
to bookmark our past,
watch your happy marriage,
slowly decay,
but like everything else,
you threw it away,

and like everything else,
i feel thrown away.

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Morning Roses

Contributed by Chanti on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:20:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Every 'vow' you made,
you say was a mistake,
he'd bring you roses in the morning,
they're plastic and fake,
was the scent of love flowers,
ever real,
wither and die away,
now i know how they feel,

hang the roses to dry,
so forever they'll last,
press them in a book,
to bookmark our past,
watch your happy marriage,
slowly decay,
but like everything else,
you threw it away,

and like everything else,
i feel thrown away.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2004-04-27 00:20:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Morning Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:57:49 AM AEST
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I felt every word........you see years ago I too divorced........and my son was young.......he is my life and I told him so.......I have never been out of his sight for a day......so I hope one of your parents and even both...feel toward you as I do my son.......you are the most important one.

Thank you for sharing this.

Re: Morning Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:18:58 AM AEST
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I'm really sorry that your parents wouldnt work things out. And I hope you start to feel a little better soon. It was a really good write.
- Stacy

Re: Morning Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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Awww i'm so sorry to hear about your parents. It has to be a tough time for you. You expressed all your pain so beautifully in this poem.

You touched my heart.

Kie

Re: Morning Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:21:46 AM AEST
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yeah i know how that is.. my parents arent together , i just had to wait it out and now everythings better. but theyre still divorced.
- life throws stuff at you that you cant always dodge-

- wild_girl121 -

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