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Array ( [sid] => 4500 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Go Away [time] => 2002-10-01 09:30:00 [hometext] => I wrote this coz I have a lot of crap stressing me out right now. [bodytext] => I don't know what I think
What I want, what I feel
Don't know what's there for me
What is and isn't real

I need something solid
That I can hold onto
I'm not sorry for feeling
But I don't know what to do

My world's tilting over
There's just too many thoughts
Not a clue what'll happen
Can't take another shot

All these blinding lights are
Making it hard to see
Why can't I close my eyes
Just wanna be happy

I can't think about that
When I'm dealing with this
You can't tell me these things
My brain is all amiss

I'm just trying to deal
Can't take on anymore
Go away and let me be
Only one can I care for [comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 21 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Go Away

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I don't know what I think
What I want, what I feel
Don't know what's there for me
What is and isn't real

I need something solid
That I can hold onto
I'm not sorry for feeling
But I don't know what to do

My world's tilting over
There's just too many thoughts
Not a clue what'll happen
Can't take another shot

All these blinding lights are
Making it hard to see
Why can't I close my eyes
Just wanna be happy

I can't think about that
When I'm dealing with this
You can't tell me these things
My brain is all amiss

I'm just trying to deal
Can't take on anymore
Go away and let me be
Only one can I care for

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2002-10-01 09:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 11:12:42 AM AEST
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Great write... advice I could attempt to give, but I'm sure you've heard it all before and it sounds like you need to find your own way through this stress. Good luck, great work.

Curtis

Re: Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 08:54:56 AM AEST
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Hey dude...I'm sorry for telling you what Aaron said. I know it wasn't exactly the right time to say anything. I should've waited till everything settled first. He does want you back though. Meh, it's your choice, I don't want you to do anything that you will regret later. I hope you can find peace and if you need anything, anything at all, I'm here for you. Always and forever.

Love,
~Emily

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