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Array ( [sid] => 44982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Battle [time] => 2004-04-26 21:35:01 [hometext] => i dont know either [bodytext] => Lost Battle

For every moment
Spent is wasted
Every wasted moment
Is hated
And you wonder why
You hate so much
And you can't look at yourself
And I wonder too
Why I'm here myself

But I never knew
That this feeling
Would take over me
As it took over you
It's like a disease
Attacking everything
And that disease
Is killing every part of me
Slowly till it does the deed
Of killing me and getting victory
Within me is slowly dying
As my outside is fighting
But my skin is frail
And is attacked and won
And my battle is lost

And I can't surrender myself
Without costing others
But my surrender to death
Was taken
And I couldn't stop it
And my life ends
With one moment wasted [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lost Battle

Contributed by essentially9 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Lost Battle

For every moment
Spent is wasted
Every wasted moment
Is hated
And you wonder why
You hate so much
And you can't look at yourself
And I wonder too
Why I'm here myself

But I never knew
That this feeling
Would take over me
As it took over you
It's like a disease
Attacking everything
And that disease
Is killing every part of me
Slowly till it does the deed
Of killing me and getting victory
Within me is slowly dying
As my outside is fighting
But my skin is frail
And is attacked and won
And my battle is lost

And I can't surrender myself
Without costing others
But my surrender to death
Was taken
And I couldn't stop it
And my life ends
With one moment wasted

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-04-26 21:35:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost Battle (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:01:40 PM AEST
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This is a really good job!

Re: Lost Battle (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:23:47 PM AEST
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You know Something about reading your poems really hits me..i LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEW POSTS AND LOVE GOING BACK AND FINDING ONE THIS DAMN GOOD..You really are so damn good here and are a plus to this site where most ppl tend to bore me..

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