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Array ( [sid] => 44948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => G.U.N.D. [time] => 2004-04-26 17:37:41 [hometext] => Ummm, this poem is about a specail little one of my friends who leads such a terrible life. If you know who you are. . . opps. [[Yeah and the ending is kinda akward but oh well- if you have the time, please, please comment on my poetry, even if it is bad- [bodytext] => Youre so angry-
Youre so depressed
You tell this to everyone
"You think youre not the best"
"You think that youre fat"
"You think youre ugly too"
"You think youre not smart"
"You think theyre laughing at you"
"You think your BOYFRIEND hates you"
"You really dont know why"
"You think its because of youre looks"
You sigh into the sky
Oh how misserable
I see that you must be
But when you let your guard down
I know that youre happy
I dont know why you do it
but you cover up your smile
maybe you want pitty
or attention all the while
but Ill sit here
not say a word
You ask me one more question
something so unheard
"Whats wrong with being depressed?"
you may be a good actor
but Ill tell you
"Youre certainly not the best."
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G.U.N.D.

Contributed by bleeding_tears on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

Youre so angry-
Youre so depressed
You tell this to everyone
"You think youre not the best"
"You think that youre fat"
"You think youre ugly too"
"You think youre not smart"
"You think theyre laughing at you"
"You think your BOYFRIEND hates you"
"You really dont know why"
"You think its because of youre looks"
You sigh into the sky
Oh how misserable
I see that you must be
But when you let your guard down
I know that youre happy
I dont know why you do it
but you cover up your smile
maybe you want pitty
or attention all the while
but Ill sit here
not say a word
You ask me one more question
something so unheard
"Whats wrong with being depressed?"
you may be a good actor
but Ill tell you
"Youre certainly not the best."

Copyright © bleeding_tears ... [ 2004-04-26 17:37:41]
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Re: G.U.N.D. (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:11:58 PM AEST
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i loved this.
the rhyme was awesome!
so well written just amazing. well done, hope to see more.
Arden

Re: G.U.N.D. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:03:24 PM AEST
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Interesting and very cute.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: G.U.N.D. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:42:22 PM AEST
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that sums her up perfectly.

Re: G.U.N.D. (User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:26:00 AM AEST
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Its not good when people act fake,
But you expressed how you felt really well.
Keep writing.

- Stacy

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