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Array ( [sid] => 44944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self-destruction [time] => 2004-04-26 17:25:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I use a knife
to end my life
Stabbing at my wrist
giving it another twist
Blood gushing out
as I scream and shout
But I'm still not dead
and that's what I dread
So now I take some pills
hoping it kills
Now my body's in pain
and I'm going insane
But yet I'm not dead
what else do I need to shed?
I did everything I can think of
all that suicidal stuff
Wait, I just thought of something
that will make me turn to nothing
This idea has to be
this idea will make me see
That death is just a few hours away
and death will just make my day
This will be a little fun
all I need is a shotgun
I'll get it loaded and be ready
and hold it to my head nice and steady
The trigger I see, I will pull
so I can finally reach my goal
5...4...3...2...1...
My life is now finally done [comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 36 [informant] => XxJesxXx420xX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Self-destruction

Contributed by XxJesxXx420xX on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I use a knife
to end my life
Stabbing at my wrist
giving it another twist
Blood gushing out
as I scream and shout
But I'm still not dead
and that's what I dread
So now I take some pills
hoping it kills
Now my body's in pain
and I'm going insane
But yet I'm not dead
what else do I need to shed?
I did everything I can think of
all that suicidal stuff
Wait, I just thought of something
that will make me turn to nothing
This idea has to be
this idea will make me see
That death is just a few hours away
and death will just make my day
This will be a little fun
all I need is a shotgun
I'll get it loaded and be ready
and hold it to my head nice and steady
The trigger I see, I will pull
so I can finally reach my goal
5...4...3...2...1...
My life is now finally done

Copyright © XxJesxXx420xX ... [ 2004-04-26 17:25:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Self-destruction (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:34:46 PM AEST
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Harsh poem! But well stated!

Re: Self-destruction (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:08:34 PM AEST
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Wonderful yet spine tingling. As I was reading this poem I felt a little of the emotion shine throught.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

Re: Self-destruction (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:40:18 PM AEST
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This is a well written poem. It stirrs up emotions and makes you think. I like the part about twisting the knife in the wrist it's disgusting but gives good imagery. awsome poem!

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