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Array ( [sid] => 44896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Complete [time] => 2004-04-26 10:38:16 [hometext] => I guess I put this under Dreams and Wishes cause it'd be nice to metamorphosise someday... [bodytext] => Shed this sorry skin
In the winds of change.
Turn this upside down,
Inside out.
Rest a while with it.
Mind over matter.
Struggled with the truth,
Reflections, Misconceptions,
Altered ideas
And faltered without doubt.
Even still...
Crawl outside this cocoon
Of shame and hate...
Cast off
All that fails
And metamorphosise
Until Complete. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 14 [informant] => reilt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Complete

Contributed by reilt on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:38:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Shed this sorry skin
In the winds of change.
Turn this upside down,
Inside out.
Rest a while with it.
Mind over matter.
Struggled with the truth,
Reflections, Misconceptions,
Altered ideas
And faltered without doubt.
Even still...
Crawl outside this cocoon
Of shame and hate...
Cast off
All that fails
And metamorphosise
Until Complete.

Copyright © reilt ... [ 2004-04-26 10:38:16]
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Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:05:55 AM AEST
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i really liked this.
it was written so well.
great job, keep it up.
Arden

Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken-glass on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:07:24 AM AEST
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Good poem. Bit like one I wrote the other day, although I did not post: using the idea of being cocooned and shedding skin etc.

Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:11:58 AM AEST
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Strong Poem, I often feel the way you have written. I think that we all at one time or another metamorphise into another way of life.

bernard.

Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:38:16 AM AEST
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Mmmm, I like this. Intriguing from the first line. Nice work.
Stitch

Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:12:14 PM AEST
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I like how you wrote this and how you worded it. I like the flow of it.
Very nicely done.

Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:40:48 AM AEST
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All these words build a world...
Wonderful.
Greetz,
Hur

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