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Array ( [sid] => 44883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With you [time] => 2004-04-26 09:04:12 [hometext] => To my dear father [bodytext] => You're here, for me
always, on my weakest side

when I close my eyes, in tears
I see your lovely face, warmly smiling at me
trace your pretty finger over my cheek
brush away my tears, in neverending tendernes

when I'm alone, lost in darkness
your bright vision appears, right beside me
hug me, whisper words of joy and dreams
beloved, smoothing voice, let me forget everything else

when I'm down, fallen from highest clouds on hardest ground
you reach out, catch my trembling hand
heal my wounds, with your gentle might
kiss my scars, with the soft lips of yours

I live that life, of misery
in a world of hate and destruction
with the longing for love and gentleness
wishing for rebirth, into another life, a new world
death and dreams, endless memorys
I'll never be loney again
allways, with you... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 55 [informant] => SugimotoYouki [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

With you

Contributed by SugimotoYouki on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:04:12 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You're here, for me
always, on my weakest side

when I close my eyes, in tears
I see your lovely face, warmly smiling at me
trace your pretty finger over my cheek
brush away my tears, in neverending tendernes

when I'm alone, lost in darkness
your bright vision appears, right beside me
hug me, whisper words of joy and dreams
beloved, smoothing voice, let me forget everything else

when I'm down, fallen from highest clouds on hardest ground
you reach out, catch my trembling hand
heal my wounds, with your gentle might
kiss my scars, with the soft lips of yours

I live that life, of misery
in a world of hate and destruction
with the longing for love and gentleness
wishing for rebirth, into another life, a new world
death and dreams, endless memorys
I'll never be loney again
allways, with you...

Copyright © SugimotoYouki ... [ 2004-04-26 09:04:12]
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Re: With you (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:22:42 AM AEST
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You must have a wonderful father... And you are a wonderful daughter, writing such beautiful and loving words.
Greetz,
Hur

Re: With you (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:39:12 AM AEST
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You show a great respect for your Father it shows in every word of your very goodpoem.Congratulations on a good piece of work.

bernard.

Re: With you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:55:35 AM AEST
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beautiful tribute, yet i detect a hint of sadness such as you miss him, go visit, hugs n' love nessa

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