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Array ( [sid] => 44844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blame [time] => 2004-04-26 00:44:27 [hometext] => first one on here. give me some feedback [bodytext] => as i come into a dying age
of glitter, glamour, and fame
i begin to wonder as to why
i have been placed in all this blame

blame for things i do not know
blame for things i should've said
and for flowing tears of sadness
as i lay me down to bed

blame is such a careless emotion
which we throw around in daily life
i blame you, you blame me
but for me it cuts deep like a knife

blame reaches deep inside my soul
and tears me into pieces
i cannot block it from my mind
the blame never ceases

i feel it slicing into my heart
i feel the blame corroding
all of my insides with great ease
a truckful of blame is unloading

so as you see, you should
be careful what you say
cuz your words can crush someones world
or make someones day... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SuperAsh16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Blame

Contributed by SuperAsh16 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:44:27 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

as i come into a dying age
of glitter, glamour, and fame
i begin to wonder as to why
i have been placed in all this blame

blame for things i do not know
blame for things i should've said
and for flowing tears of sadness
as i lay me down to bed

blame is such a careless emotion
which we throw around in daily life
i blame you, you blame me
but for me it cuts deep like a knife

blame reaches deep inside my soul
and tears me into pieces
i cannot block it from my mind
the blame never ceases

i feel it slicing into my heart
i feel the blame corroding
all of my insides with great ease
a truckful of blame is unloading

so as you see, you should
be careful what you say
cuz your words can crush someones world
or make someones day...

Copyright © SuperAsh16 ... [ 2004-04-26 00:44:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by blondie_64865 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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It really speaks alot of truth. It easy to point the finger at someone else instead of who is really responsible.

Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:56:53 AM AEST
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Aw, this is so sad, but also very true. I love it and look forward to reading more of your poems. Very well written.
~JadedExistence~

Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:11:40 AM AEST
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Very true work of art.
When one faces self then healing comes.
very good work.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:51:39 AM AEST
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aww this one is so true.
To one person blame might be something that is never thought of twice
while to another it is something
that destroys their whole life..
excellent work...
Katie

Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGPASSION on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:19:35 AM AEST
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great write i loved it

Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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A good write

remi

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