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Noose hung with wordless mentions
Fire burning inside the skin
A lifetime of unprecribed pain will win.

Softly massage the memories away
It takes a clear mind to die this way
Place the rope around my already broken neck
Always been told I played short of a full deck.

Suicide devine, mind revenge strays
Close the curtains to hide my body from the peaceful day
Climb on the chair, grasped to the ceiling
Placing myr hope in reality, letting going of feeling.

The chair falls away, as I hang motionless
Images of life flash sweet devotionless
Mesmerizing the way this feels
Hanging there silent, as my innocense it steals.
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BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe

Contributed by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:30:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Knot tied with poisonous intentions
Noose hung with wordless mentions
Fire burning inside the skin
A lifetime of unprecribed pain will win.

Softly massage the memories away
It takes a clear mind to die this way
Place the rope around my already broken neck
Always been told I played short of a full deck.

Suicide devine, mind revenge strays
Close the curtains to hide my body from the peaceful day
Climb on the chair, grasped to the ceiling
Placing myr hope in reality, letting going of feeling.

The chair falls away, as I hang motionless
Images of life flash sweet devotionless
Mesmerizing the way this feels
Hanging there silent, as my innocense it steals.

Copyright © xSlashXPrettyXSkinx ... [ 2004-04-25 22:30:58]
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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:33:54 PM AEST
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This is really sad, but really well done! Made me tear up!

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:27:10 AM AEST
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I agree that it is sad but it also very beautifully written. It had great imagry. Good write.
~JadedExistence~

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:03:12 AM AEST
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You certainly write with alot of insight ;)

Last lines are true but disturbing.....Great poem

Silent

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:43:42 AM AEST
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really, really good poem! i love it.

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:07:48 AM AEST
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Great poem, really gives me mental pictures of someone doing it, i'd rather be slitting my wrists :)

:D
Kakashi

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:53:07 PM AEST
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excellent, vivid, tragically mesmerizing from title to last line:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:59:33 PM AEST
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your talent is amazing.
such true raw emotion. i am a fan now.
cant wait to read more.
Arden

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:32:38 PM AEST
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I agree. Awsome poem! The words you chose to write this piece... I can't explain. They helped describe the scene much better than if some other person had attempted to write this. Great job!!! Look forward to reading more!

Re: BReaK NeCK SuiCiDe (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:22:45 PM AEST
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another wonderful one.. i really like ur writings.. you have a lot of talent and you should keep writing... i relate to them so well and love reading your poems.. AMI JO

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