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Array ( [sid] => 44823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Star That Burned Out Bright [time] => 2004-04-25 21:47:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Don’t choke up
You will breathe eventually
And I will be the oxygen
To bring the color back to your lungs

Could I be anymore
Of a convenience to you
I don’t think so
Not in this lifetime

You are, you are
My favorite star
Falling faster and faster and faster
Till you break apart

I’ll be right here
Burning up in the atmosphere
Waiting for you to fall into me
And end this race we call love

Keep your eyes closed
So no one knows that you’re not sleeping
Don’t pay them mind and you’ll be fine
Just stick with me

I know I know I know I know I know
That you feel like letting go
But you can’t
Cuz when you wake up
We will see your celestial make up
And dream of you

You are, you are
My favorite star
Falling faster and faster and faster
Till you break apart

I’ll be right here
Burning up in the atmosphere
Waiting for you to fall into me
And end this race we call love

You are, you are
My favorite star
Falling faster and faster and faster and faster
Till you break apart

How does it feel
To light the sky
To see the world one more time
With new eyes [comments] => 5 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 34 [informant] => paper-heart-hero [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
The Star That Burned Out Bright

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Don’t choke up
You will breathe eventually
And I will be the oxygen
To bring the color back to your lungs

Could I be anymore
Of a convenience to you
I don’t think so
Not in this lifetime

You are, you are
My favorite star
Falling faster and faster and faster
Till you break apart

I’ll be right here
Burning up in the atmosphere
Waiting for you to fall into me
And end this race we call love

Keep your eyes closed
So no one knows that you’re not sleeping
Don’t pay them mind and you’ll be fine
Just stick with me

I know I know I know I know I know
That you feel like letting go
But you can’t
Cuz when you wake up
We will see your celestial make up
And dream of you

You are, you are
My favorite star
Falling faster and faster and faster
Till you break apart

I’ll be right here
Burning up in the atmosphere
Waiting for you to fall into me
And end this race we call love

You are, you are
My favorite star
Falling faster and faster and faster and faster
Till you break apart

How does it feel
To light the sky
To see the world one more time
With new eyes




Copyright © paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-04-25 21:47:57]
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Re: The Star That Burned Out Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:49:53 PM AEST
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Well I didnt know what to think by the title. Now I do and I like it very much. like your style able to understand and easy to read. sandy


Re: The Star That Burned Out Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:09:34 PM AEST
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Paper, this was absolutely beautiful. Made my entire body melt from the very first word. Great write. :)
xslashxprettyxskinx


Re: The Star That Burned Out Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:12:07 PM AEST
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A beautiful, flowing masterpiece.

Kie


Re: The Star That Burned Out Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:28:51 AM AEST
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"How does it feel
To light the sky
To see the world one more time
With new eyes"

Wow, that just rocked!! :) Great write


Re: The Star That Burned Out Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:06:38 PM AEST
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could i be anymore.....of a convenience to you.....i don't think so........not in this lifetime.........wow.......that hits home......awesome lyrics........




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