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How destroyed I would be.
For I would be lost In a turbulent sea.
Up against rocks , Waves crashing toward me.
In Davie Jones locker
At the bottom of the sea.
If I ever lost you!

If you ever say One final goodbye,
My heart would just stop beating,
And I wouldn’t care why.
While inside the ambulance
They’re pumping my chest.
The only thing escaping
Is your name on my lips.
If I ever lost you!

If you ever turned
And walked out my door.
And right then I realize
I will see you no more.
There wouldn’t be a bridge
Or mountain too high.
That would keep me from jumping
While your name I would cry.
If I ever lost you!

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Robert_Edgar_Burns [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

IF I EVER LOST YOU!

Contributed by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 30th September 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If you ever left me,
How destroyed I would be.
For I would be lost In a turbulent sea.
Up against rocks , Waves crashing toward me.
In Davie Jones locker
At the bottom of the sea.
If I ever lost you!

If you ever say One final goodbye,
My heart would just stop beating,
And I wouldn’t care why.
While inside the ambulance
They’re pumping my chest.
The only thing escaping
Is your name on my lips.
If I ever lost you!

If you ever turned
And walked out my door.
And right then I realize
I will see you no more.
There wouldn’t be a bridge
Or mountain too high.
That would keep me from jumping
While your name I would cry.
If I ever lost you!

Copyright Â© Robert_Edgar_Burns ... [ 2002-09-30 20:30:00]
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Re: IF I EVER LOST YOU! (User Rating: 1 )
by fancyface4898 on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:35:55 AM AEST
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Very nicely written. There was a great love that you were losing and you did it justice by writing about it

Re: IF I EVER LOST YOU! (User Rating: 1 )
by kimbo on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 12:39:08 AM AEST
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thankyou for sharing this poem with us all very well written and the layout is good really enjoyed it keep up the good writing

Re: IF I EVER LOST YOU! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 06:06:07 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem, it may be in an srchive but who cares. I like it! It reminds me of me right now!lol!

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