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Array ( [sid] => 44780 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No more of your love [time] => 2004-04-25 16:16:50 [hometext] => Love is blind, and it will take over your mind, what you think love, is truely not, you need to elavate your mind [bodytext] => Emotions runing back and forth,
Tears coming down my face,
And he left me a broken heart,
That some other boy has to mend,
Last night it rained,
All I could was cry and let the emotions,
Just come out and leave me alone,
I have been hurt time and time again,
When I see the sunshine I'm okay,
But later on in the night I hurt,
So bad and write down everything I remembered,
About you in this little diary,
Then I lay my head on my pillow,
And I squezze it so tight,
So when I close my eyes,
I picture you just holding me

The stars shine so bright,
And it leads a sign to me,
That you need me but,
Do you really need me,
Or are you using me just,
To get back at someone,
You hurt me before,
So now I have to find better,
Love is so blind,
It will take over your mind,
It will lead you into things that,
You think you will never do,
This girl's heart is torn forever,
Until someone can heal it,
And put a lock on it so it can be sealed

The sound of you use to make me cry,
But now I can't cry over you no more,
Things have started to change,
And I'm wondering if it's relationships,
That seem to get me down,
And crying all night,
For you ain't never gonna have this again,
You keep trying to hold on to me,
See it's not gonna work,
So please stop trying,
I really really loved you,
But you pushed me away and now I'm gone
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No more of your love

Contributed by luckycharm on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:16:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Emotions runing back and forth,
Tears coming down my face,
And he left me a broken heart,
That some other boy has to mend,
Last night it rained,
All I could was cry and let the emotions,
Just come out and leave me alone,
I have been hurt time and time again,
When I see the sunshine I'm okay,
But later on in the night I hurt,
So bad and write down everything I remembered,
About you in this little diary,
Then I lay my head on my pillow,
And I squezze it so tight,
So when I close my eyes,
I picture you just holding me

The stars shine so bright,
And it leads a sign to me,
That you need me but,
Do you really need me,
Or are you using me just,
To get back at someone,
You hurt me before,
So now I have to find better,
Love is so blind,
It will take over your mind,
It will lead you into things that,
You think you will never do,
This girl's heart is torn forever,
Until someone can heal it,
And put a lock on it so it can be sealed

The sound of you use to make me cry,
But now I can't cry over you no more,
Things have started to change,
And I'm wondering if it's relationships,
That seem to get me down,
And crying all night,
For you ain't never gonna have this again,
You keep trying to hold on to me,
See it's not gonna work,
So please stop trying,
I really really loved you,
But you pushed me away and now I'm gone

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-25 16:16:50]
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Re: No more of your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:23:48 PM AEST
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Oh I certainly could relate to this because I have been there. Gosh I cried for so long and it left me devastated. A very powerful poem Lucky.

Kie

Re: No more of your love (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:09:57 PM AEST
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Perfecy write. Just wonderful. :)
xslashxprettyxskinx

Re: No more of your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:19:01 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. I think this is a good thing, moving on is a good thing. I hope you find the person that is right for you.

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