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Array ( [sid] => 44776 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dark angel [time] => 2004-04-25 16:11:23 [hometext] => *** [bodytext] => i could be your dark angel,
be here to guide and hate you,
take you under my wings,
love, care and protect you,
in discontented happiness,
we could rule each other,
together in our twisted darkness,
this crown is big enough for both of us,
we would be happy in our misery
and i would i hate everything about you,
and i would love everything about you,
and you would love/loath me too,
deceased perfection..
you make me feel broken...
...but you complete me with your darkness,
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dark angel

Contributed by lostinmyself on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:11:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i could be your dark angel,
be here to guide and hate you,
take you under my wings,
love, care and protect you,
in discontented happiness,
we could rule each other,
together in our twisted darkness,
this crown is big enough for both of us,
we would be happy in our misery
and i would i hate everything about you,
and i would love everything about you,
and you would love/loath me too,
deceased perfection..
you make me feel broken...
...but you complete me with your darkness,

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-04-25 16:11:23]
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Re: dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:14:41 PM AEST
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Dark and resonates with love and hate.

Very interesting and unique.

Kie

Re: dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST
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Oooo! Beautiful twistedness! I liked it! I wrote a poem kind of like this in the sense that a lot of the words canceled out n' stuff like that.

Re: dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:56:42 PM AEST
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Whoa!! Very interesting indeed... talk about the difference betwwen night and day... love and hate...
WOW!! Neat poem... I liked it... keep writing..
~Donna~

Re: dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:06:21 PM AEST
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i love love love this! wow!
amazing work.
keep it up.
Arden

Re: dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:59:21 AM AEST
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Hail to you, dark angel..may the thorned corwn fit the both of us...
Hugs,
Hur

Re: dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by buccaneer on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:57:21 PM AEST
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it nice and i think you wouldn't mind my saying i would love to be both the good and bad as long as you will be there.people change but life dosen't since you will be there in the heart it#s better to know life is not a bed of roses.
lovely poem.

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