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where we will find a place
to start a fire and let it blaze
this meeting is to destroy
any memory left of you
and while i can burn the memories
i cannot rid myself of the feelings

i've asked you here to see if you would like
to end yourself with my memories tonight

this is the only truth i can seem to embrace
on the tip of my tongue, hate, is all i can taste
by morning there will be only ashes
and i will bury those so far down inside
so far down inside of me
that they won't even be the memory
of a memory.
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meet me in my heart

Contributed by fallensilence on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:07:04 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

meet me in my heart
where we will find a place
to start a fire and let it blaze
this meeting is to destroy
any memory left of you
and while i can burn the memories
i cannot rid myself of the feelings

i've asked you here to see if you would like
to end yourself with my memories tonight

this is the only truth i can seem to embrace
on the tip of my tongue, hate, is all i can taste
by morning there will be only ashes
and i will bury those so far down inside
so far down inside of me
that they won't even be the memory
of a memory.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2004-04-25 11:07:04]
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Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:17:31 AM AEST
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this is the only truth i can seem to embrace
on the tip of my tongue, hate, is all i can taste
by morning there will be only ashes
and i will bury those so far down inside
so far down inside of me
that they won't even be the memory
of a memory.

i just LOVED that! im speechless, really.
just so damn good. i loved it.
well done keep up the amazing work.
Arden

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by silentrain07 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:25:58 AM AEST
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I love that last part! this whole thing is so true for so many people. Love can hurt like this i know...im going through it. this was an awesome poem...keep the with the fine writing!

-katie

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by JesusFreak313 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:49:32 AM AEST
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Wow! That's so beautiful! The last stanza especially is just....amazing! Great write! :D

God bless,

Frances

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by eviegirl on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:10:39 PM AEST
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definetly a great poem. The last stanza especially, but all of it is good. wonderful expression.

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:41:13 PM AEST
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What a shame that love turns to hate. A good poem well expressed. I think that even a hate so deeply buried will occasionaly raise it's head from the depths.

bernard.

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ChrisvanOostrom on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
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Powerful stuff.

Chris

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by parkman on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:33:42 PM AEST
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Powerful write that wants to make you read it again and again, excellent

Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:51:20 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful and so filled with feeling, your title drew me right in, hugs n' love, nessa

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Re: meet me in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:07:42 PM AEST
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Wow, Fallen. That was a wonderful write. Sad but so emotional. Deep. I could really relate.

Lindsey

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