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Array ( [sid] => 44683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take Me Away [time] => 2004-04-24 22:33:38 [hometext] => I wrote this poem because its how i feel...everytime im around people i dont know i feel like i dont belong... [bodytext] => everybodys talkin...but i dont hear a thing
they look at me with happy smiles
but all i can do is cry inside
in a crowd of people
i feel so lost, so isolated
like im not supposed to be here
theyre all laughing; making jokes, being happy
why cant i be like that?
they all have dreams and hopes
all i have is fear and loneliness
why do i have to be like this?
im so lost here...
wont somebody help me find my way?
keep me from being blinded
get rid of all the tears behind my eyes
and help me find a better place...
please take me away from here

-Arian Assana (Katie) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 61 [informant] => silentrain07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Take Me Away

Contributed by silentrain07 on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

everybodys talkin...but i dont hear a thing
they look at me with happy smiles
but all i can do is cry inside
in a crowd of people
i feel so lost, so isolated
like im not supposed to be here
theyre all laughing; making jokes, being happy
why cant i be like that?
they all have dreams and hopes
all i have is fear and loneliness
why do i have to be like this?
im so lost here...
wont somebody help me find my way?
keep me from being blinded
get rid of all the tears behind my eyes
and help me find a better place...
please take me away from here

-Arian Assana (Katie)

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Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:05:58 PM AEST
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very good...(I hate it when I say that) but it really is. I know how you feel. It's hard to find you're place sometimes..just be yourself..a fine poet. Don't see tears as blinders, but as cleansers...and keep up the fine writing...: *)

Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:30:33 AM AEST
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this was really great. it describes how i've felt plenty of times. especially when im in class or something. well, i dont mean to ramble so i'll finish up. keep up the good work. -david

Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:48:34 PM AEST
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awesome poem, keep writing......then you'll find yourself

Re: Take Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by bobbyclay56 on Saturday, 22nd October 2011 @ 02:29:16 PM AEST
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Some of us visit there some of us live there liked it very much.

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