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[aid] => mick
[title] => Who Am I Really?
[time] => 2004-04-24 19:35:05
[hometext] => I wrote this poem recently because ive been trying to find myself lately.
[bodytext] => "Who am I?" I say as I look into the mirror. I see a jock, musician, intelligent girl. Who am I really? I look into the mirror. I see a body that I do not like. Who am I really? I look into the mirror. I see anger, hate, pain, depression, sadness, and jealousy. Who am I really? I look into the mirror. I see a caring friend who doesn't always get in return what she wants, who cares more for her friends then herself. I don't want to be the person people think I am. I want to be the person I truly am inside.
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Who Am I Really?
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farmtowngirl
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:35:05 PM in AEST
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"Who am I?" I say as I look into the mirror. I see a jock, musician, intelligent girl. Who am I really? I look into the mirror. I see a body that I do not like. Who am I really? I look into the mirror. I see anger, hate, pain, depression, sadness, and jealousy. Who am I really? I look into the mirror. I see a caring friend who doesn't always get in return what she wants, who cares more for her friends then herself. I don't want to be the person people think I am. I want to be the person I truly am inside.
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Re: Who Am I Really?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:41:02 PM AEST
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Keep searching, you will find the real you. It takes us all a while to find who we are and become comfortable with it. It just takes time to learn life and what niche you want to fit into in your world. It is not easy but it is worth the searching. Very good expression of feelings.
Rita
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Re: Who Am I Really?
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by JimPoe on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:54:18 PM AEST
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Thats a feeling ive had many times. Specially going trough school, even though i im trough with that now i still have that feeling sometimes.
I have never been able to describe it with words though, very well done. |
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Re: Who Am I Really?
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:54:24 PM AEST
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I just wrote a poem similar to this. Yours is a very good write. Keep trying to find yourself, Theres nothing to lose in trying.
-Stacy |
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Re: Who Am I Really?
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:33:28 PM AEST
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By your own defination, I see someone who is going to be able to climb so high and be happy with the outcome.
Excellent write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Who Am I Really?
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:34:10 PM AEST
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i like this one so much cause i really need answer for that question and i also wrote a poetry calles "Who am I?
please if you know the answer please tell me... |
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