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The lightning flashes
The rain pours down
Crash!
Bang!
Swish! Swish!
The floods come up
And the rain comes down
No where to run
And no where to hide
Try to run and try to hide
There is NO WHERE
You will be found
February 17th 2000
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Cant Find Me

Contributed by lil_angel on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The thunder crashes
The lightning flashes
The rain pours down
Crash!
Bang!
Swish! Swish!
The floods come up
And the rain comes down
No where to run
And no where to hide
Try to run and try to hide
There is NO WHERE
You will be found
February 17th 2000

Copyright © lil_angel ... [ 2004-04-24 16:44:34]
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Re: Cant Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:12:34 PM AEST
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lovely poem...well written and very enjoyable!

Faith

Re: Cant Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:41:09 PM AEST
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You penned your words well. There is a lot of power and emotion stated here. Very good work for a young person.

Rita

Re: Cant Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:58:25 PM AEST
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Swish swish? You bring out the LGBT in me! ;)

Seriously, a very appealing poem. Very well done.

Re: Cant Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:35:10 AM AEST
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This Is Really A Great Write lil_angel :-)I Love It !!!!!!
And You Are A Part Of That Poem I Just Posted Hun...It Goes For Everyone Here At YPDC !!!!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Cant Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:12:12 PM AEST
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HERE IS A ROPE . TIE A KNOT AND HANG ONE. WE LOVE YOU. HERE IS A HUG. YOU GOT US YOU WILL NEVER BE ALONE. good poem. like how you express your feelings. sandy

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