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Array ( [sid] => 44638 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We miss you. [time] => 2004-04-24 16:43:12 [hometext] => (don't know if it can be called a poem, i just felt i needed to write down my feelings) [bodytext] => Havent you allways wondered what would happend in your life
if you could just change this one thing?
How would your life be right now?

You tell me that you like where it's going, yet you spend
each night alone secretly crying, thinking that noone cares.
You had enough and you cant continue.
You say you dont want me to be part of your problems.
You shut the door and throw away the key.

Crying, struggeling, realizing.

Years has passed, accomplished nothing. Moving on, looking
forward. Steps are too heavy, you cant seem to find the way back.

Crying, struggeling, realizing.

We miss you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 39 [informant] => JimPoe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

We miss you.

Contributed by JimPoe on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:43:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Havent you allways wondered what would happend in your life
if you could just change this one thing?
How would your life be right now?

You tell me that you like where it's going, yet you spend
each night alone secretly crying, thinking that noone cares.
You had enough and you cant continue.
You say you dont want me to be part of your problems.
You shut the door and throw away the key.

Crying, struggeling, realizing.

Years has passed, accomplished nothing. Moving on, looking
forward. Steps are too heavy, you cant seem to find the way back.

Crying, struggeling, realizing.

We miss you.

Copyright © JimPoe ... [ 2004-04-24 16:43:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: We miss you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:47:40 PM AEST
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It is so hard to bear when one of your loved ones is struggling with life and decisions. I myself went through a period like this with a loved one. It was the hardest thing I have ever lived through. Did not think I would make it. I wish you the very best and your loved one to find the strength they need.

Rita

Re: We miss you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:22:00 PM AEST
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Hello Jim and a very warm welcome to YPDC. If you are expressing your thoughts and feelings you are writing poetry for it comes in all different forms. I hope you like it here and i'll look for your poetry in the future.

If you need help with anything give me a holler.

Keep on writing!

Kie

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