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The stars beating almost to a repentance
Close your eyes hear the almost rhythm
Its not the end just looking for a beginning

Like the last call to the bands encore
You cant get enough, you just want more
Listen close dont let it just fade
Keep it close as if forever was just a day

Darkness can hold you close with a gentle carress
Never let you lose your sanity to the emptiness
Hold me tight never let me go, yes you
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Midnight Rhythm

Contributed by Wicked on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The nights footsteps echo upon the silence
The stars beating almost to a repentance
Close your eyes hear the almost rhythm
Its not the end just looking for a beginning

Like the last call to the bands encore
You cant get enough, you just want more
Listen close dont let it just fade
Keep it close as if forever was just a day

Darkness can hold you close with a gentle carress
Never let you lose your sanity to the emptiness
Hold me tight never let me go, yes you
Let this be my encore my midnight only debut

Copyright © Wicked ... [ 2004-04-24 13:37:19]
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Re: Midnight Rhythm (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:44:11 PM AEST
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Wow, this is an excellent writing. I'm impressed =)
"The almost rhythm" is such an interesting idea...... there's rhythm, then there's "almost rhythm"...... hmmmm...... =)

Very well done ; )

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Midnight Rhythm (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:31:05 PM AEST
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I love the night.. though I have learned to dread its coming for I can't seem to get very many restful sleeps. But regardless the night is a wonderful place and herein you captured a picture the rhytms of the night...nice write!...I really enjoyed it.

Re: Midnight Rhythm (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:11:10 AM AEST
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A short, concise write, teeming with excellent phrasing. I loved the subject, and the title itself is catching. Very good, i'll be watching for more of your work.

Truly,
-V.S.

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