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Array ( [sid] => 44588 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If You Knew... [time] => 2004-04-24 10:12:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If you knew that today was the last day of my life,
Would you treat me differently?

If you knew that I was carrying guilt, other's burdens, and grief in my heart,
Would you try to comfort me and ask if everything is alright?

If you knew that I would never see tomorrow,
Would you make today the best for me?

If you knew that I were to go to hell,
Would you try and witness to me?

If you knew that there was pain when you looked in my eyes,
Would you give me a shoulder to cry on?

If you knew the thing I loved most,
Would you give it to me even though you wanted it instead?

If you knew the acts of how I were to die,
Would you try to save me?

If you knew that I was dealing drugs,
Would you try to stop me?

If you knew that all was right,
Would you still be my friend when other's turn their heads? [comments] => 0 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 11 [informant] => StephWebb04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

If You Knew...

Contributed by StephWebb04 on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:12:24 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

If you knew that today was the last day of my life,
Would you treat me differently?

If you knew that I was carrying guilt, other's burdens, and grief in my heart,
Would you try to comfort me and ask if everything is alright?

If you knew that I would never see tomorrow,
Would you make today the best for me?

If you knew that I were to go to hell,
Would you try and witness to me?

If you knew that there was pain when you looked in my eyes,
Would you give me a shoulder to cry on?

If you knew the thing I loved most,
Would you give it to me even though you wanted it instead?

If you knew the acts of how I were to die,
Would you try to save me?

If you knew that I was dealing drugs,
Would you try to stop me?

If you knew that all was right,
Would you still be my friend when other's turn their heads?

Copyright © StephWebb04 ... [ 2004-04-24 10:12:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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