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Array ( [sid] => 44582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is he the one for me [time] => 2004-04-24 08:53:24 [hometext] => Please Comment On This Please [bodytext] => Torn hearts shatter in the ocean,
And are not able to connect again,
When I begin to get mad,
It's like fire sparks in the air,
But you remain happy and,
I become so lost because of you,
When I think of you,
It starts to rain and it keeps,
Falling right on me,
I feel like a fallin' star,
That can never rise again,
My tears are like big oceans and rivers,
Cause the tears never fade away,
When I feel the wind,
I think about your touch,
But I'm tired of this stuff,
We have to go thru everyday,
If you really cared you would at least,
Take some time to talk to me,
Instead of pushing me away from you,
He knows this girl loves him so much,
And he know this girl would never hurt him,
So all I need to know is,
Is he the one for me?

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Is he the one for me

Contributed by luckycharm on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Torn hearts shatter in the ocean,
And are not able to connect again,
When I begin to get mad,
It's like fire sparks in the air,
But you remain happy and,
I become so lost because of you,
When I think of you,
It starts to rain and it keeps,
Falling right on me,
I feel like a fallin' star,
That can never rise again,
My tears are like big oceans and rivers,
Cause the tears never fade away,
When I feel the wind,
I think about your touch,
But I'm tired of this stuff,
We have to go thru everyday,
If you really cared you would at least,
Take some time to talk to me,
Instead of pushing me away from you,
He knows this girl loves him so much,
And he know this girl would never hurt him,
So all I need to know is,
Is he the one for me?

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-24 08:53:24]
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Re: Is he the one for me (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 10:42:45 AM AEST
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I doubt it that he is ther one for you. True love does not hold back it is a giving of one's very self and that means two souls in complete harmony,
Does that answer your question?

bernard

Re: Is he the one for me (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:57:35 AM AEST
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An emblem of misery well depicted. Nice work!
-Thivanka

Re: Is he the one for me (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:41:31 PM AEST
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Sad Poem, but really well written.

~Brittany~

Re: Is he the one for me (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:04:21 PM AEST
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Very Sad Write....But Written Really Well...
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
******************************

Re: Is he the one for me (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:04:19 PM AEST
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I agree with bernard and then I dont... It just takes some time to know if he is for sure...maybe you should give it a chance to settle and see other people and then when the waters have cleared try again.

Lindsey

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