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''If you Believe, You can See''
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:43:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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there's something to see
if you know how to look
Adults miss things
that they yearn to see
Only children and those who believe
can see what no one else can
It's a mystery, a myth, a dream
of what's to come, of other worlds,
of other times, there's truth in what children say and in every fairy tale
Copyright ©
StoneAngel
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2004-04-24 00:43:18]
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Re: ''If you Believe, You can See''
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by eternallyloved on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:12:47 AM AEST
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| good write. Keep it up. |
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Re: ''If you Believe, You can See''
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:17:56 AM AEST
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When we grow up it seems we lose our child's eyes and our fairy tale dreams. Why is this? I dunno.
I thought this was a nice first poem to submit.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
I look forward to reading more.
Kie |
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Re: ''If you Believe, You can See''
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:26:02 AM AEST
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| Really well done! Excellent job! |
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Re: ''If you Believe, You can See''
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:29:38 AM AEST
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| Welcome to the site again, great pice of poetry. :) |
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Re: ''If you Believe, You can See''
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:25:10 AM AEST
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This is awesome!! *high five* lol
Keep it up! |
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