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Swing her back and catch her
Sing the sweet melody of your heart
Through the motions of your bodies swaying.

Slowly undress her piece by piece
Savoring every lingering portion of skin
Feel her goosebumps as you graze her flesh
Let her sense each quake in her muscles.

Lie her down on the comfort of the mattress
Steady yourself over her perfect silhouette
Slide yourself into her innermost wetness
Fighting against the pressure of her thighs.

Lick and suck her welcoming collarbone
Fondle each supple breast
Appreciate the woman lying beneath you
Caress and create.

Quietly she moans
The screams in praise
This whirlwind of greatness ready to explode
The tidal wave decends; but you remain. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

CaReSS aND CReaTe

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:19:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Hold her hand deep in your palm
Swing her back and catch her
Sing the sweet melody of your heart
Through the motions of your bodies swaying.

Slowly undress her piece by piece
Savoring every lingering portion of skin
Feel her goosebumps as you graze her flesh
Let her sense each quake in her muscles.

Lie her down on the comfort of the mattress
Steady yourself over her perfect silhouette
Slide yourself into her innermost wetness
Fighting against the pressure of her thighs.

Lick and suck her welcoming collarbone
Fondle each supple breast
Appreciate the woman lying beneath you
Caress and create.

Quietly she moans
The screams in praise
This whirlwind of greatness ready to explode
The tidal wave decends; but you remain.

Copyright © strange_lindsey ... [ 2004-04-23 21:19:24]
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Re: CaReSS aND CReaTe (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:37:31 PM AEST
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I found this style beautiful,it was very passionate in a sensual and not sexual way.But most of all I loved your last verse:"The tidal wave descends;but you remain".Sealed with beauty and grace-

PumpkinPie

Re: CaReSS aND CReaTe (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:04:03 PM AEST
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This is gorgeous. Sublime images, filled with passion and an erotic, romantic touch. A beautiful piece, from a beautiful mind.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: CaReSS aND CReaTe (User Rating: 1 )
by paper-heart-hero on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:03:13 AM AEST
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this was a bit intoxicating... you're great with your descriptions and delivery. words i didnt think would work in poetry flowed so well. great job linz!

~james

Re: CaReSS aND CReaTe (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:00:05 AM AEST
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Ahhhh sweet dreams and memories revisited with this one. Beautiful.

You have made another dark night bright, thank you so very much.

Re: CaReSS aND CReaTe (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:23:27 PM AEST
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ahh lindsey this is so very sensuous and beautiful:) keep writing!! hugs n' love nessa

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