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Array ( [sid] => 44501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fidelity ch2 - White Abduction [time] => 2004-04-23 18:29:24 [hometext] => Exact correspondence with fact or with a given quality, condition, or event; accuracy. [bodytext] => A man loses his wife, what's worth more?
Forgetting who he is, never to be the same,
In vengence, when it rains - it will pour,
All that rage, and hes not to blame,
His eternal fate on the line for revenge,
Only two more to kill for his peace,
and in his scheadule he shall arrange,
The taking of their lifes, for lost love's fees...

White light awakes crusty eyes. The young man stares into doctor's tie, releived enough that he didn't die, he raises himself. As two fades to one he looks to grasp surroundings, but in white walled housing he is restrained with leather boundings. His shock bring panic, and muscle spasims manic, doctors weilding tonic inject him till he calms once again.

Sir just relax, let us help you,
Medical attention is way over due,
Stop fighting us you're bleeding badly - fool!

This abduction escapes the young man, he gives in to the waves of rubber hands, not caring now what he understands. Bleeps and lights fill ambient air, doctors sweating with much despair. In his stupor he had mumbled from clear to inaudible blankness:

Waiting for you in unconcious loneliness,
in this stuppor, I wait for you to visit me,
But you never come.

Surely tommarow, my heart should break,
I've felt it tear for quite some time,
For how long could it sustain this life?

Go on with your life, releive this pain,
Oh love, I want you to know one thing,
That you made me happy, so very happy.

laying here staring upon the cracks in the floor,
White walled room, two windows and a door,
and I cannot escape, no matter how much I dream. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => spiffyphil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Fidelity ch2 - White Abduction

Contributed by spiffyphil on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:29:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



A man loses his wife, what's worth more?
Forgetting who he is, never to be the same,
In vengence, when it rains - it will pour,
All that rage, and hes not to blame,
His eternal fate on the line for revenge,
Only two more to kill for his peace,
and in his scheadule he shall arrange,
The taking of their lifes, for lost love's fees...

White light awakes crusty eyes. The young man stares into doctor's tie, releived enough that he didn't die, he raises himself. As two fades to one he looks to grasp surroundings, but in white walled housing he is restrained with leather boundings. His shock bring panic, and muscle spasims manic, doctors weilding tonic inject him till he calms once again.

Sir just relax, let us help you,
Medical attention is way over due,
Stop fighting us you're bleeding badly - fool!

This abduction escapes the young man, he gives in to the waves of rubber hands, not caring now what he understands. Bleeps and lights fill ambient air, doctors sweating with much despair. In his stupor he had mumbled from clear to inaudible blankness:

Waiting for you in unconcious loneliness,
in this stuppor, I wait for you to visit me,
But you never come.

Surely tommarow, my heart should break,
I've felt it tear for quite some time,
For how long could it sustain this life?

Go on with your life, releive this pain,
Oh love, I want you to know one thing,
That you made me happy, so very happy.

laying here staring upon the cracks in the floor,
White walled room, two windows and a door,
and I cannot escape, no matter how much I dream.




Copyright © spiffyphil ... [ 2004-04-23 18:29:24]
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Re: Fidelity ch2 - White Abduction (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:42:19 AM AEST
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okay, what's next?
good read, so far.


Re: Fidelity ch2 - White Abduction (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:24:14 PM AEST
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It's a moving scene. Part of me feels the need to make spelling corrections, but for the emotional pull of the poem, I haven't the heart. It feels like the inside of my ex's head when he told me he used to try to drink himself to oblivion. It's so awful sometimes what love can do to people - yet it can also be such a healing thing. People's character shows in what they do at such times.




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