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You've Changed
Contributed by
youlied
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:12:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Daddy, where are you?
It's me, your "little tike"
I want you to teach me
to ride my new bike
We could play cath
Or ride in your car
Where's Vietnam Daddy?
Is it really that far?
Mommy, what happened?
He's never around
Why do you cry at night
without making a sound?
I've missed you Daddy
But, oh, how you've changed
You're not like my daddy
Your world seems pained
Copyright ©
youlied
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2004-04-23 15:12:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You've Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:16:28 PM AEST (User
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you left me wishing for more on this........great write.......... |
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Re: You've Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:16:48 PM AEST (User
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Awww this is soooooooo sweet! So sad! But well worded! |
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Re: You've Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:22:04 PM AEST (User
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Simply done, but so effective.... It brought tears to my eyes....
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Re: You've Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:24:24 PM AEST (User
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Yes the effects on the soldiers of war are great. Good write.
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Re: You've Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:18:17 PM AEST (User
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if only little kids were this poetic... lol, no but realy it's a good write! just thinking... yea. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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