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God knows my heart is bleeding.
Just to know that people feel this way,
I wish i could make everyone feel okay.
But i can't so i'm crying now,
But i just don't know how..
How to make everything okay,
I just hate honestly feeling this way,
So i pray and hope that my words can help..
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Heart bleeds

Contributed by discantbelife on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:18:21 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I been reading and reading
God knows my heart is bleeding.
Just to know that people feel this way,
I wish i could make everyone feel okay.
But i can't so i'm crying now,
But i just don't know how..
How to make everything okay,
I just hate honestly feeling this way,
So i pray and hope that my words can help..
Stop someone from killing them self

Copyright © discantbelife ... [ 2004-04-23 14:18:21]
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Re: Heart bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:01:34 PM AEST
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Very well stated! Great job!

Re: Heart bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by Dragontear27 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:06:19 PM AEST
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Great job on the poem very well written.

Re: Heart bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:14:29 PM AEST
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erg... when i know them, i do hope and pray and try... but yet again, this is a good reminder. ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Heart bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by mickie on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:55:22 AM AEST
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listen, you're knocked down, but not out. i have this agreement to life i wrote last year that i signed my name on three times. it might be silly, but it helps me. you need to email me so i can give you a copy of it. i want to help. i also realize that that might not be possible, but listen, please respond to me. i wanted to kill myself for two hard years running. i really know the feeling. and if someone you know is thinking about checking out, tell me and never stop praying. i will be praying for you. please get in touch, okay? i will tell you more about myself, okay?
peace always. you take care.

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