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Array ( [sid] => 44431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Awful Silence [time] => 2004-04-23 08:22:42 [hometext] => raw emotions included (abstract and lyrical) [bodytext] => The Awful Silence

Come on
chug something on me to shut me up
you know you want to
I know you want to
don't let me be the only one to talk
like always
lets at least keep quiet *together*

see that smile on my face
it lies
those eyes laugh at you
they're cold
don't feel
don't care

What do I care for?
Why should I care for?

I can say things that go right through your soul
I see through you
that scares you to death
still I get no response
and you know I'm right
that scares you to death
listen to the voice in your head
keeps telling you the same
keeps whispering my name
that scares you to death
still I get no response

I laugh myself to sleep
I'm loosing my mind
I'm going insane by your side
it terrifies you
still I get no response
so I keep repeating
like the voice in my head
it tells me so
I should let you go
...
can't
such a coward, eh?

Speak to me!
Speak to me now!
Answer me!
Answer me now!
I need to hear you
I need to know
Anytime, anyway, anyhow!

When was the last time you gave me a smile?
You just shuffle your hands
their sweatty
you want to flood the world or what?
I smirked at my own insults
Abusing you?
Yes because you let me to
still I get no response

So much time wasted upon contemplating
Is it worth it?
This relationship?
This whole pile of ...?
Am I worth you?
Even better- Are you worth me?

no


K, now that this is settled
I guess I'll go
And don't turn back
cause I know you wont ask me to stay
and even if
you'll wont get a response... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 6 [informant] => dAWn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
The Awful Silence

Contributed by dAWn on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:22:42 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



The Awful Silence

Come on
chug something on me to shut me up
you know you want to
I know you want to
don't let me be the only one to talk
like always
lets at least keep quiet *together*

see that smile on my face
it lies
those eyes laugh at you
they're cold
don't feel
don't care

What do I care for?
Why should I care for?

I can say things that go right through your soul
I see through you
that scares you to death
still I get no response
and you know I'm right
that scares you to death
listen to the voice in your head
keeps telling you the same
keeps whispering my name
that scares you to death
still I get no response

I laugh myself to sleep
I'm loosing my mind
I'm going insane by your side
it terrifies you
still I get no response
so I keep repeating
like the voice in my head
it tells me so
I should let you go
...
can't
such a coward, eh?

Speak to me!
Speak to me now!
Answer me!
Answer me now!
I need to hear you
I need to know
Anytime, anyway, anyhow!

When was the last time you gave me a smile?
You just shuffle your hands
their sweatty
you want to flood the world or what?
I smirked at my own insults
Abusing you?
Yes because you let me to
still I get no response

So much time wasted upon contemplating
Is it worth it?
This relationship?
This whole pile of ...?
Am I worth you?
Even better- Are you worth me?

no


K, now that this is settled
I guess I'll go
And don't turn back
cause I know you wont ask me to stay
and even if
you'll wont get a response...




Copyright © dAWn ... [ 2004-04-23 08:22:42]
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Re: The Awful Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by tweaks2004 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:38:47 AM AEST
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Very good write. sorry that you had to get in this mood i know how you feel. :)


Re: The Awful Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:42:06 AM AEST
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intense write vivid raw emotions.
michelle


Re: The Awful Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:42:09 AM AEST
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Very unique write. This reminded me of a rant and was versed just right. Very good indeed.




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