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love fades in gentle defeat.

Shadowed spirits gasp for air;
as hands choke them beyond despair.

Broken wings feel unmendable
when love seems so expendable.

Fate twines inner hate forever
when you always surrender.

People just come and go, steady flow;
always playing their part of the show.

With no escape but that in death,
and only true rest found, a bed of earth.

I should see some beauty in it all,
but too much flaw won't let beauty stand tall.

So for life I'm left laughing in the rain,
with every felt pain that won't let me explain.

Left looking crazy as the fool, my part;
when thoughts of suicide won't soon depart.

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Kindred Darkness

Contributed by Black13 on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

With dying heartbeat
love fades in gentle defeat.

Shadowed spirits gasp for air;
as hands choke them beyond despair.

Broken wings feel unmendable
when love seems so expendable.

Fate twines inner hate forever
when you always surrender.

People just come and go, steady flow;
always playing their part of the show.

With no escape but that in death,
and only true rest found, a bed of earth.

I should see some beauty in it all,
but too much flaw won't let beauty stand tall.

So for life I'm left laughing in the rain,
with every felt pain that won't let me explain.

Left looking crazy as the fool, my part;
when thoughts of suicide won't soon depart.

Copyright © Black13 ... [ 2004-04-22 18:52:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:01:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful.

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:09:27 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by hope on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:20:54 PM AEST
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Very well written...it flows very nicely. I love ...with every felt pain that won't let me explain....I am anticipating more works!! God Bless
hope

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:54:06 AM AEST
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I felt every word I know what this is you captured my soul with this one beautiful
michelle

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:52:01 AM AEST
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Seems to be a common pain among poets. This is telling and intriguing. I like the feel of it. Nice write.
Stitch

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:42:36 PM AEST
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with every felt pain that won't let me explain...........wow....awesome write........

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:58:09 PM AEST
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Intriguing write. Nice flow. Very impressive for a first post.
Stitch

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:57:51 AM AEST
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wowie... i love this.
i love how dark and deep this is.
the rhyme was amazing.
well done. keep it up.
Arden

Re: Kindred Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:37:12 AM AEST
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very good style. beautifully written..you have good command on rhyming..Best of luck. venkat

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