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Array ( [sid] => 44313 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Symphony [time] => 2004-04-22 15:32:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take to my conviction
A spirit of your religeon
As better days
Form force field rays
That build walls of contradiction
I locked my soul within
My bitter stone faced grin
And as i sit
Behind walls of *****
My head begins to spin
The days are growing colder
As chips fall from my shoulder
My memory shall linger
As i poke my tiny finger
Into the eyes of the beholder
Maybe i'll stay awhile
Sort life in single file
Sure ill probably loose
But i will always choose
To take it with a smile.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Rickaby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Symphony

Contributed by Rickaby on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:32:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Take to my conviction
A spirit of your religeon
As better days
Form force field rays
That build walls of contradiction
I locked my soul within
My bitter stone faced grin
And as i sit
Behind walls of *****
My head begins to spin
The days are growing colder
As chips fall from my shoulder
My memory shall linger
As i poke my tiny finger
Into the eyes of the beholder
Maybe i'll stay awhile
Sort life in single file
Sure ill probably loose
But i will always choose
To take it with a smile....

Copyright © Rickaby ... [ 2004-04-22 15:32:27]
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Re: The Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:35:14 PM AEST
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eww... i'm not good at taking it with a smile sometimes... but a good reminder, nice writing! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: The Symphony (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:44:05 PM AEST
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great write! we all need to be reminded to try to take it with a smile.

Re: The Symphony (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:43:30 AM AEST
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different...liked the ending

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