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Array ( [sid] => 4431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I stand alone [time] => 2002-09-29 14:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I stand alone and look up high.
If my heart had wings, to you it'd fly.
The wind that blows whispers softly in the night.
The moon is watching you for me, what a beautiful sight.

Your sweet brown eyes and your luscious lips,
I constantly dream back on that first kiss.
Smiling eyes, resplendent and true...
I knew from that moment, I had to have you.

Now here i stand alone, lost in the darkened sky.
I feel so lost and empty, the heart inside me dies.
My eyes quickly swelling up with tears,
I've never been so lonely in all of my years.

The starry night sky fills suddenly with clouds.
I feel my heart sinking, I hear the thunder rumbling aloud.
Remembering all those times I drempt of dancing in the rain with you...
I'll never lose hope, will it one day come true?

But for now I stand here alone, a mixture of tears and rain trickeling down my face.
The drops begin to fall harder, as I wonder where you are in this time and place.
I pray that you are happy, and that I'm the only one feeling this pain.
I don't have to try and hide my feelings now...tears are invisible when it rains. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 43 [informant] => starlight~starbright [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I stand alone

Contributed by starlight~starbright on Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I stand alone and look up high.
If my heart had wings, to you it'd fly.
The wind that blows whispers softly in the night.
The moon is watching you for me, what a beautiful sight.

Your sweet brown eyes and your luscious lips,
I constantly dream back on that first kiss.
Smiling eyes, resplendent and true...
I knew from that moment, I had to have you.

Now here i stand alone, lost in the darkened sky.
I feel so lost and empty, the heart inside me dies.
My eyes quickly swelling up with tears,
I've never been so lonely in all of my years.

The starry night sky fills suddenly with clouds.
I feel my heart sinking, I hear the thunder rumbling aloud.
Remembering all those times I drempt of dancing in the rain with you...
I'll never lose hope, will it one day come true?

But for now I stand here alone, a mixture of tears and rain trickeling down my face.
The drops begin to fall harder, as I wonder where you are in this time and place.
I pray that you are happy, and that I'm the only one feeling this pain.
I don't have to try and hide my feelings now...tears are invisible when it rains.




Copyright © starlight~starbright ... [ 2002-09-29 14:00:00]
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Re: I stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 03:26:16 PM AEST
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I love this...it's a bit sad but beautiful all the same...my favorite line would have to be

"I don't have to try and hide my feelings now...tears are invisible when it rains."


Lasca


Re: I stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 04:26:41 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful!!!! A bit sad, but enjoyable read.
I just love the last line also....
Jenni


Re: I stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 30th September 2002 @ 12:09:49 PM AEST
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"tears are invisible when it rains" - I love that line! Beautiful poem! Welcome to ypdc!!

~ MoonlitAngel


Re: I stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 08:21:26 AM AEST
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verybeautiful! sad, but nice write, welcome to your poetry, hope you keep posting these great poems!


Re: I stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 06:12:58 PM AEST
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Starlight-starbright, what a beautiful expression of your feelings. I love your poem. Dot




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