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Array ( [sid] => 44300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Head hurting [time] => 2004-04-22 14:13:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Head Pounding
Heart Aching
Almost nothing
Anger rising & baking
Taken advantage of
By a boy! None-the-less,
thought it'd be great,
filled the caress,
He doesn't feel guility,
and neither do I
But why then, is it
That I still cry?
Holding me close,
I thought it was true,
I thought he was someone,
Someone I knew.
I asked him, " Is this a one time thing"
I knew what he meant,
And he knows what I mean
I still don't regret it
And I don't think I should
Bit I know one thing
I wouldn't if I could
Ever take anger that
is inside of my heart
Because of what he did
to me!
My heart is aching,
my mind is on fire
Wanting to ask this
guy why he did
what he did to me
I never knew that
this was going
to ruin my life,
I never knew That it was
going to destroy my
friendship with this person
I'm very heart broken because
of what he did to me
and I wish that I could
learn to forgive him
but I don't think that I can
because of all the pain
and he has put me through.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 24 [informant] => lildrama04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Head hurting

Contributed by lildrama04 on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Head Pounding
Heart Aching
Almost nothing
Anger rising & baking
Taken advantage of
By a boy! None-the-less,
thought it'd be great,
filled the caress,
He doesn't feel guility,
and neither do I
But why then, is it
That I still cry?
Holding me close,
I thought it was true,
I thought he was someone,
Someone I knew.
I asked him, " Is this a one time thing"
I knew what he meant,
And he knows what I mean
I still don't regret it
And I don't think I should
Bit I know one thing
I wouldn't if I could
Ever take anger that
is inside of my heart
Because of what he did
to me!
My heart is aching,
my mind is on fire
Wanting to ask this
guy why he did
what he did to me
I never knew that
this was going
to ruin my life,
I never knew That it was
going to destroy my
friendship with this person
I'm very heart broken because
of what he did to me
and I wish that I could
learn to forgive him
but I don't think that I can
because of all the pain
and he has put me through.

Copyright © lildrama04 ... [ 2004-04-22 14:13:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Head hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:21:40 PM AEST
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"closure will come..." don't worry, let time heal something like this. and realize: it was only a boy! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Head hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by NirvanaLotus on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:41:35 AM AEST
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i gotta disagree with the person who commented before me. doesnt matter how extreme of an event happened between you two, if it was fooling around, sex, what, i dont know, i dont need to.
But closure is never really there in this case. I'm sorry. What happened... All you can do is learn from it. And begin to heal from it. there will always be a wound, but wear it proudly, because it's made you stronger.
great poem babe

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