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Array ( [sid] => 44285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The pain i feel [time] => 2004-04-22 12:50:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My parents don't understand the way i feel
they hurt me in ways that they can't realise
but all these feelings i have to conceal
because no one will see things through my eyes

I long to tell someone of my pains
but what if they dont understand or laugh
then expressing myself will be in vain
my life is going down the wrong path

I have to wake up from these bad dreams
the abuse i go through is not fair
my life seems to be tearing from the seams
but i will not live my life in despair

because im am stronger than that
i will surpass this nightmare
and now i know where im at
so from now on my life i will share [comments] => 8 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Dragontear27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The pain i feel

Contributed by Dragontear27 on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:50:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My parents don't understand the way i feel
they hurt me in ways that they can't realise
but all these feelings i have to conceal
because no one will see things through my eyes

I long to tell someone of my pains
but what if they dont understand or laugh
then expressing myself will be in vain
my life is going down the wrong path

I have to wake up from these bad dreams
the abuse i go through is not fair
my life seems to be tearing from the seams
but i will not live my life in despair

because im am stronger than that
i will surpass this nightmare
and now i know where im at
so from now on my life i will share

Copyright © Dragontear27 ... [ 2004-04-22 12:50:51]
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Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:57:50 PM AEST
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great poem. you sound like a really strong person. you'll have ups and downs but you will get through it, the way you're going.
good luck!
hey, about your feelings. i'm there too, and others will be too. don't worry. you are never alone, even if it feels that way...

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:58:09 PM AEST
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great poem. you sound like a really strong person. you'll have ups and downs but you will get through it, the way you're going.
good luck!
hey, about your feelings. i'm there too, and others will be too. don't worry. you are never alone, even if it feels that way...

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:07:07 PM AEST
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hum... strong surmisal in this writing, a sense of closure perhaps? i hope so, sounds like you want/need it. good write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by discantbelife on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:07:18 PM AEST
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i just remeber goin through this when i was a teenager n the pain i felt cuz no one understood the pain i felt at time i would just be so depressed it wasnt even funny. But im here now better than ever so i can tell you thin much all this that your goin through will make you like a brick wall that no one can break down unless u allow them to...keep it up nice write

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:17:03 PM AEST
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brilliant poem, i know you can stay strong. and if people do laugh, they are not worth it. i hope everything works out well for you. *hugs* phil xxx

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:42:43 PM AEST
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My words cant express how well this poem is. Good Jod.

(V)ortis-Dark

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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Wow such an awe-inspiring poem. It sounds like a life I lead, remakably. This required a lot of emotion from what it sounds like.

Re: The pain i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:36:28 AM AEST
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WOW!!! This is a great poem... very emotional... and u expressed those emotions well...
If u ever need to talk... lust PM me... 'cause I've felt ur pain b4 in my own life...
~Donna~

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