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Array ( [sid] => 44280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Glad Slapped Her! [time] => 2004-04-22 12:12:21 [hometext] => If everything works out, i'm be lying in blood later... [bodytext] => Roots of darkness,
Live in me.
You put them there.
And you're not even sorry!

Slash marks and scars,
Are lined up my wrist.
And all this time,
I never used my fist

But them you started today!
On top of everything.
Don't expect me to ignore it world!
I was numb, and my rage was burning!!

I couldn't let it go this time.
Why should I have been wrong?
Living with her brought deep insanity,
Living like this, is the stupidest thing I've ever done!!

I asked for your problem!
IT'S NOT THAT HARD TO SAY!
You said there's nothing, then looked at me laughing,
And when I stared, you looked away!

I asked you why you did it,
So you smiled in my face,
So maybe, you didn't realize how much you annoyed me,
Then you denied it with your *****y* haste!

So I ******** slapped you!
And it's about time I did it and all.
But coz you're such a ****** liar,
You made me become that one that was cruel!!

And my ******* stuck-up school,
Has taken your side and all.
And I hope you're all really happy now,
Coz ******* suicides the only way out!!





[comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 67 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => Edited due to the use of banned words. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => schoolproblems )
I'm Glad Slapped Her!

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:12:21 PM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems



Roots of darkness,
Live in me.
You put them there.
And you're not even sorry!

Slash marks and scars,
Are lined up my wrist.
And all this time,
I never used my fist

But them you started today!
On top of everything.
Don't expect me to ignore it world!
I was numb, and my rage was burning!!

I couldn't let it go this time.
Why should I have been wrong?
Living with her brought deep insanity,
Living like this, is the stupidest thing I've ever done!!

I asked for your problem!
IT'S NOT THAT HARD TO SAY!
You said there's nothing, then looked at me laughing,
And when I stared, you looked away!

I asked you why you did it,
So you smiled in my face,
So maybe, you didn't realize how much you annoyed me,
Then you denied it with your *****y* haste!

So I ******** slapped you!
And it's about time I did it and all.
But coz you're such a ****** liar,
You made me become that one that was cruel!!

And my ******* stuck-up school,
Has taken your side and all.
And I hope you're all really happy now,
Coz ******* suicides the only way out!!









Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-22 12:12:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I'm Glad Slapped Her! (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:55:10 PM AEST
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Wow, such anger! but good job!


Re: I'm Glad Slapped Her! (User Rating: 1 )
by discantbelife on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:11:32 PM AEST
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ummm wow. yeah some time some people just need slap across the face, although i dont promote violence it hard as a teenager especially when people keep pushing you buttons anyways i hope this poem helped you


Re: I'm Glad Slapped Her! (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:18:37 PM AEST
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it seems you wrote this in an angry flurry, at least denoted by the spelling errors... beyond that, a nice rant - hope the crap doesn't last too long! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: I'm Glad Slapped Her! (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:11:06 PM AEST
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I Am Happy You Slap Her In The Faces. Friends Always Seem To Stap People In The Back Some Reason. Only Your True Friends Wont


Re: I'm Glad Slapped Her! (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:44:12 PM AEST
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Very emotional, and extremely angry but I have to agree that some people do need to be slapped. Great write.
~JadedExistence~




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