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Is waiting in the darkness
It calls my name
As I attempt to sleep
With unclosed eyes
And a pounding heart

They know nothing
And they will remain clueless
As I hold to my silence

My racing blood
Creates this screen of happiness
To hide my hurt pain tears

All I can hear is my epithet crying for an answer
And my presence to fill it’s shallow tomb

How can I die without trying?
How can I erase this scar?
My expectations are laid for me
In a concrete trap that will forever contain
All my dreams and all the love
That has left me wanting

They have imprisioned me for changing
So now I speak lies of unheard motions
That conceal my transformation
As they nod in false comprehension

I am the only one who can set me free
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My Fickle Fight

Contributed by kayald on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My musicless grave
Is waiting in the darkness
It calls my name
As I attempt to sleep
With unclosed eyes
And a pounding heart

They know nothing
And they will remain clueless
As I hold to my silence

My racing blood
Creates this screen of happiness
To hide my hurt pain tears

All I can hear is my epithet crying for an answer
And my presence to fill it’s shallow tomb

How can I die without trying?
How can I erase this scar?
My expectations are laid for me
In a concrete trap that will forever contain
All my dreams and all the love
That has left me wanting

They have imprisioned me for changing
So now I speak lies of unheard motions
That conceal my transformation
As they nod in false comprehension

I am the only one who can set me free

Copyright © kayald ... [ 2004-04-22 10:57:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Fickle Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:49:49 PM AEST
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angry drivel in your thought process seems to go well in sorting your things out... i like this write, contemplative and well-composed. ;0)
~Remy~

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