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Array ( [sid] => 44203 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breathing My Last Breath [time] => 2004-04-21 22:30:02 [hometext] => #7 in my Avril Series, inspired by Tomorrow. For everyone who's ever been confused about how they feel. [bodytext] => Everything you say
Never actually turns out that way
You tell me it'll be okay
But I can't live with this another day

You can't tell me how to feel
And if I didn't have to deal with you
Maybe I could start to heal
But this is how I feel today

I'll do what I have to
Whatever it takes just to make it through
My sanity rests on you
And if you're gone, what the hell do I do?

I'm not ready for tomorrow
I try to believe you but I just don't know
I can't see what you won't show
I'm living in the long ago's

Yesterday I cried
You loved all my pain away
Today I'm dying
And you're breathing my last breath
Tomorrow I'll fly
And you'll move on, I'm sure, I know it

What you say
It's not that way
Am I okay?
I can't live today
What can I do
To pull me through?
Can't depend on you
What do I do?

Don't tell me what I feel
I can't face tomorrow
This is who I am today
And I don't think I'll be okay [comments] => 4 [counter] => 603 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Breathing My Last Breath

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Everything you say
Never actually turns out that way
You tell me it'll be okay
But I can't live with this another day

You can't tell me how to feel
And if I didn't have to deal with you
Maybe I could start to heal
But this is how I feel today

I'll do what I have to
Whatever it takes just to make it through
My sanity rests on you
And if you're gone, what the hell do I do?

I'm not ready for tomorrow
I try to believe you but I just don't know
I can't see what you won't show
I'm living in the long ago's

Yesterday I cried
You loved all my pain away
Today I'm dying
And you're breathing my last breath
Tomorrow I'll fly
And you'll move on, I'm sure, I know it

What you say
It's not that way
Am I okay?
I can't live today
What can I do
To pull me through?
Can't depend on you
What do I do?

Don't tell me what I feel
I can't face tomorrow
This is who I am today
And I don't think I'll be okay




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2004-04-21 22:30:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Breathing My Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:52:25 PM AEST
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Wow! Great as always! Your talent blows me away!


Re: Breathing My Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:14:34 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good I Love It !!!!!!!!!! :-)
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Re: Breathing My Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:16:05 PM AEST
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I feel your inner cry.... it moved me... words that express a inner being.. and its beautiful..lovely...


Re: Breathing My Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by lilmom101 on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:32:15 AM AEST
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alot of sad emotions i think it was good




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