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Array ( [sid] => 44186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promises [time] => 2004-04-21 20:50:02 [hometext] => What I wish he knew. I only hope one day I have the guts to tell him. [bodytext] => If you look at me,
I promise not to turn away.
I will stare into your eyes,
get lost in them all day,
and you will find me.

If you talk to me,
I promise not to speak.
All I will do is listen,
my ear is what you seek,
and there we will be.

If you want to hold me,
I promise not to move.
I will feel safe in your arms,
our bond will improve,
my fears will disappear.

If you come to love me,
I promise the feelings returned.
I will trust you with my heart,
from each other we will learn,
your soul with mine.

This I promise you.
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Promises

Contributed by eternallyloved on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

If you look at me,
I promise not to turn away.
I will stare into your eyes,
get lost in them all day,
and you will find me.

If you talk to me,
I promise not to speak.
All I will do is listen,
my ear is what you seek,
and there we will be.

If you want to hold me,
I promise not to move.
I will feel safe in your arms,
our bond will improve,
my fears will disappear.

If you come to love me,
I promise the feelings returned.
I will trust you with my heart,
from each other we will learn,
your soul with mine.

This I promise you.

Copyright © eternallyloved ... [ 2004-04-21 20:50:02]
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Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:51:36 PM AEST
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sweet poem
nice job

Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:52:25 PM AEST
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forgot to tell you good luck with the one you wrote this for, i hope you'll tell him too

Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:35:38 PM AEST
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This Is So Sweet And Written Very Well
I Wish You The Best Of Luck...I Say Tell Him Tomorrow How You Feel LoL :-)
The Sooner The Better I Was Always Told...
******LoVe**AnGeL********
*****************************

Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:01:27 PM AEST
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Great job! I love the wistfulness of this. And I know exactly how it feels!
God bless.
Andrew

Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:06:09 AM AEST
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Did you crawl into my heart and read it??? I read what you posted in April in the Forums, so I'm reading your poetry now thinking it's better late then never...and its as if I'm reading my own thoughts...odd this. (mary)

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