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Array ( [sid] => 44152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bringing The Pain [time] => 2004-04-21 03:43:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I am sitting in my chair, I watch as they pull out your hair
These gouls are going to take you to school
As I sit in my chair, I am just going to watch, as they pull your insides out
From your crotch
Tell me does it really hurt
Being tied, and being burnt
I can smell your blood boiling now
I can taste your soul everytime you scream out
No one can help you, for they don't even want to
What your eyes hurt, well let me pull one out for you
There is that better, do you feel brand new
I can see your face is turning red,
I bet you're half dead
What are you thinking, wait don't tell me
I already know
You want me to start sinking teeth, just so you can feel ecstasy
To bad it won't be that easy
First you have to please me, tell me what it is worth
And tell me does it really hurt
For I can feel no pain, and I have no shame
And to tell you the truth I really love this game
I have no mercy, for your pitty little life
And for that, I just might make you my wife
A mistress of darkness you shall become
And with this life that I give you
Together we shall become one
Just you and I
Will take love to the streets, where we will eat and drink
And leave people full of blood, and bodies left to stink
As their souls into us they will sink. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rylo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Bringing The Pain

Contributed by Rylo on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:43:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



As I am sitting in my chair, I watch as they pull out your hair
These gouls are going to take you to school
As I sit in my chair, I am just going to watch, as they pull your insides out
From your crotch
Tell me does it really hurt
Being tied, and being burnt
I can smell your blood boiling now
I can taste your soul everytime you scream out
No one can help you, for they don't even want to
What your eyes hurt, well let me pull one out for you
There is that better, do you feel brand new
I can see your face is turning red,
I bet you're half dead
What are you thinking, wait don't tell me
I already know
You want me to start sinking teeth, just so you can feel ecstasy
To bad it won't be that easy
First you have to please me, tell me what it is worth
And tell me does it really hurt
For I can feel no pain, and I have no shame
And to tell you the truth I really love this game
I have no mercy, for your pitty little life
And for that, I just might make you my wife
A mistress of darkness you shall become
And with this life that I give you
Together we shall become one
Just you and I
Will take love to the streets, where we will eat and drink
And leave people full of blood, and bodies left to stink
As their souls into us they will sink.




Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2004-04-21 03:43:03]
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Re: Bringing The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:47:00 AM AEST
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Iv got extreme chills right down to my bones this settled into my very being OMG!
michelle


Re: Bringing The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 05:19:18 AM AEST
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wow....well what am i saying wow for? you must like sugarisland.org i love it lol i love this poem i want to hear more from you.......could you be any more morbid? i love morbid people i love things that are of death, just dont tell ppl you think this way, i just got out of the psyche unit and let me tell you, it was no fun


Re: Bringing The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:45:30 PM AEST
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yeah lol i just got out of a psych ward too. this is...well...i dont really know what to call it. massochism? abuse? rape? i have NO idea. but whatever it is, it's hella creepy. i like.

addie


Re: Bringing The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:36:06 AM AEST
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Hey Ron... if this got anymore morbid... I swear my oldest nephew wrote it! lol Whoa! Where did this come from? WOW! What can I say...? Gave me chills... Good write... I think lol!
~Donna~




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