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Paper Heart Hero
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He knew the folds and creases well
He grasped it gently in his fist
He planned each move with sharp precision
My paper heart he held; sun-kissed.
He concentrates discreetly on the hows
And prosecutes the whats and whys
Washes away my never evers
He watches my paper heart die.
In his eye a hot tear fell
In his mind he harbored tortured thoughts
If only he could have held my hand
If only he could have been my paper heart hero.
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2004-04-21 02:39:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Paper Heart Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:43:28 AM AEST (User
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Very creative!
U did an awesome job with this.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Paper Heart Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by mountainhigh on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:00:38 AM AEST (User
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That is sweet, thanks for sharing. another page to the perfect book. |
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Re: Paper Heart Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:01:38 AM AEST (User
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excellent write loved the title too.
wildej. |
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Re: Paper Heart Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:56:08 AM AEST (User
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sweetly bittersweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Paper Heart Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by paper-heart-hero on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:39:50 AM AEST (User
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HORRIBLE!! .... lol just kidding. That was fantastic! If I would've known it was going to be that good I would've actually asked YOU to use my name lol. Great great job!! If you're ever interested in what my name actually means let me know ;). ~James |
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