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Array ( [sid] => 44141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => iS NeVeR BeTTeR? [time] => 2004-04-21 01:58:50 [hometext] => I know you guys are probably tired of hearing about Jared, but this is just something I wrote last night... I pine secretly every night... I e-mailed this to him though and he called me today to tell me he GOT the e-mail...I dunno if thats good. *shrugs* [bodytext] => Half alert in the shadows of her bedroom
Tracing the outlines of phantoms on her wall
She relaxes enough; body in a trance
As voices scream through silent noise.

These spokesmen of her psyche
These salesmen of her heart
They whisper the secrets she never revealed
The questions she's always thought.

In life and in love; death and in heartbreak
She's never wanted anyone so intensely
With hope and excitement she desires
In loss and despair she bleeds.

Is it better to get one minute, one hour?
Or better that it had never been?
She drowns in the pool of thoughts and commotions
Floating on empty dreams and wishes in her head.

To want him is to choose him
To love him is to bruise him
To live him, breathe him, kiss him
To lose him, chase him, release him.

Was forever really so far away?
Was happiness left for another day?
Was this her only chance?
To find true loves romance?

In this cold, lonely room
Darkened by depression
She fights the battle in her head and wonders-
Is never Better? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

iS NeVeR BeTTeR?

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:58:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Half alert in the shadows of her bedroom
Tracing the outlines of phantoms on her wall
She relaxes enough; body in a trance
As voices scream through silent noise.

These spokesmen of her psyche
These salesmen of her heart
They whisper the secrets she never revealed
The questions she's always thought.

In life and in love; death and in heartbreak
She's never wanted anyone so intensely
With hope and excitement she desires
In loss and despair she bleeds.

Is it better to get one minute, one hour?
Or better that it had never been?
She drowns in the pool of thoughts and commotions
Floating on empty dreams and wishes in her head.

To want him is to choose him
To love him is to bruise him
To live him, breathe him, kiss him
To lose him, chase him, release him.

Was forever really so far away?
Was happiness left for another day?
Was this her only chance?
To find true loves romance?

In this cold, lonely room
Darkened by depression
She fights the battle in her head and wonders-
Is never Better?

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Re: iS NeVeR BeTTeR? (User Rating: 1 )
by Vickie on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:07:50 AM AEST
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great write!! i bet he liked it too!!! ;-)

Re: iS NeVeR BeTTeR? (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:08:25 AM AEST
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This is so sweet! Excellent job!

Re: iS NeVeR BeTTeR? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:21:22 AM AEST
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very good writing friend.
Hey u can talk about who ever, what ever as u are a very talented writer.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: iS NeVeR BeTTeR? (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:07:44 AM AEST
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Hope is what this says, may you find your hope. I like this one much. Thanks for sharing.

Re: iS NeVeR BeTTeR? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:13:03 AM AEST
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awww, no, never is not better, lindsey, this is wonderfully expressed:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: iS NeVeR BeTTeR? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:48:26 PM AEST
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"These salesmen of her heart
They whisper the secrets she never revealed"
- that was genious... :)

no, never is not better... especially when someone comes into your life and affects you so strongly like this.... I know the feeling. Great write.

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