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rain
Contributed by
Vickie
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Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:58:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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it was sunny for the past few days,
i should of went to sleep earlier cause now its raining again.
drizzling outside and pouring inside.
it always starts to pour when im thinking about us;
wishing how it could be, how it would be, how it should be...
but now things have all changed.
you used to be the one who wanted to give up and i never let you,
now im the one who's giving up.
maybe its because i cant be in a relationship with someone who cant tell me that they love me,
...not even a whisper.
or maybe its because i ask too much,
or maybe its because i like you falling asleep in my arms and i dont want to let go,
or maybe its because you want everything to be a secret,
or maybe because you never want to talk about us,
or maybe its because you think im too sensitive,
or maybe its because we're so different,
or maybe its because im in love with you and it hurts...
Copyright ©
Vickie
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2004-04-21 01:58:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:05:26 AM AEST (User
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Good write! This sounds familer....good job! |
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Re: rain
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:50:45 AM AEST (User
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The rain may be falling hard outside,
But your smile makes it all alright....
~Don't frown.....live 5 more minutes ~ |
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Re: rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:14:07 PM AEST (User
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This Is Really Good I Like It !!!!!!! Job Well Done !!!!!!!!! Keep Em Coming Vickie
*********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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