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Array ( [sid] => 44110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rain or Tears? [time] => 2004-04-20 19:57:19 [hometext] => I got inspired... [bodytext] => Tears fall like rain
As they fall twords the earth
But tears are for pain
And rain is rebirth

Like loving a your 1st
From friends to romance
They're memories forever
And you get only one chance

You try for a 2nd
And though rare, can be found
Understanding and caring
A light with a shroud

You see the light through the tears
And rain starts to fall
Hope comes from fears
As love becomes all [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lifefliesby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Rain or Tears?

Contributed by lifefliesby on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears fall like rain
As they fall twords the earth
But tears are for pain
And rain is rebirth

Like loving a your 1st
From friends to romance
They're memories forever
And you get only one chance

You try for a 2nd
And though rare, can be found
Understanding and caring
A light with a shroud

You see the light through the tears
And rain starts to fall
Hope comes from fears
As love becomes all

Copyright © lifefliesby ... [ 2004-04-20 19:57:19]
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Re: Rain or Tears? (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:17:50 PM AEST
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very nicely written

Re: Rain or Tears? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:25:19 PM AEST
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I thought the poem was excellent but I got stuck in the second stanza/first line--"Like loving a your 1st"

I'm not sure if its a typo or meant to be that way but if you reworded it or changed a couple of words this poem would be absolutely perfect.

Kie

Re: Rain or Tears? (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:43:30 AM AEST
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That's so cute, I really like it. I love the whole rain-rebirth thing. Great write!

~ Moonlit

Re: Rain or Tears? (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:28:15 PM AEST
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Forever and always we'll be friends and I'll love you like a cherished friend. Thanks for writing this.
Bravo and encore.

*Never frown for you never know who is falling in love with your smile*

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