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Array ( [sid] => 44097 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This it Seems [time] => 2004-04-20 18:19:32 [hometext] => Just the way I feel, I won't apologize for my beliefs. I hope you all enjoy. [bodytext] => Seems such a dark and pessimistic view,
seems it would cause a life full of pain,
seems it would make life unlivable,
to have an existence where you do not reign.

Seems it would cause a heart permanently broken,
seems it would send one into depression,
seems such a terrible way in which to live,
to have an existence where you aren't the obsession.

Seems one would be blind to the good of others,
seems it would be so utterly lonely,
seems like life lacking inspiration,
to have an existence where you aren't the only.

Seems it would cause the sky to plummet,
seems it would cause life with no possible adoration,
seems such an evil world in which to reside,
to live in existence without your salvation.

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This it Seems

Contributed by eternallyloved on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:19:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Seems such a dark and pessimistic view,
seems it would cause a life full of pain,
seems it would make life unlivable,
to have an existence where you do not reign.

Seems it would cause a heart permanently broken,
seems it would send one into depression,
seems such a terrible way in which to live,
to have an existence where you aren't the obsession.

Seems one would be blind to the good of others,
seems it would be so utterly lonely,
seems like life lacking inspiration,
to have an existence where you aren't the only.

Seems it would cause the sky to plummet,
seems it would cause life with no possible adoration,
seems such an evil world in which to reside,
to live in existence without your salvation.

Copyright © eternallyloved ... [ 2004-04-20 18:19:32]
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Re: This it Seems (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:18:51 PM AEST
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seems like a pretty good poem.

Lindsey

Re: This it Seems (User Rating: 1 )
by GODSBESTIMAGE on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:18:23 PM AEST
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Now, you can't trust anyone, brother, and sister. There is no man that you can trust. Man are liars, cheaters, unreliable, childish, stubborn, headheaded, unfaithful, distrustful, ungrateful, hateful, steal, ...etc. You get the point but with God you can depend on him for anything and everything and don't even have to worry about it. You can trust him everytime.

Gwenmarie

Re: This it Seems (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:20:07 AM AEST
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I just wonder why you don't post it under inspitational poetry? It does inspire...

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