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I sense a distrubing presence.
Projecting sharp objects through one's skin.
In my mind.
The mind of a killer.

I want your blood to drip.
Drip in a mess.
To me shall all the spoils go.
Hiding these all in my mind.
The mind of a killer.

You see me as normal.
I see you as somthing I must carve into.
Make you perfect I shall.
Make your perfections imperfect with my steel knife.

Will you scream.
Loud and long.
As my blade penetrates deep into you.
A wond I will Create.
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The Mind of a Killer

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Laughter fills my mind as I see you walk about.
I sense a distrubing presence.
Projecting sharp objects through one's skin.
In my mind.
The mind of a killer.

I want your blood to drip.
Drip in a mess.
To me shall all the spoils go.
Hiding these all in my mind.
The mind of a killer.

You see me as normal.
I see you as somthing I must carve into.
Make you perfect I shall.
Make your perfections imperfect with my steel knife.

Will you scream.
Loud and long.
As my blade penetrates deep into you.
A wond I will Create.
In the mind of a killer.

Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2004-04-20 16:24:37]
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Re: The Mind of a Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:26:18 PM AEST
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repetitive ramblings on this mind proves futile, i AM the killer... okay, okay, maybe not. still - good write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: The Mind of a Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:49:03 PM AEST
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Whilst you did make a confusing contradiction in the third stanza, I quite enjoyed tripping out in this mindset.

"Make you perfect I shall."

Brooding and disturbed.
Well done.

Re: The Mind of a Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:21:34 PM AEST
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Great poem as always Mortis. :) Seems like you took a trip on the Lindsey express tonight... LOL

Lindsey

Re: The Mind of a Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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I have a fascination with the profiling of killers. So I wonder based on your poem if this is the way a mind works in regards to being a killer.

Very interesting and food for thought.

Kie

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