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Array ( [sid] => 44062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One girl not enough? [time] => 2004-04-20 14:52:17 [hometext] => Don't you just hate hidden secrets your loved ones keep [bodytext] => The broken ice of frozen tears
Tears that run down my gentle face
Why make them fall? why cause this pain?
Did you fear i may do the same?

You act as though it was my fault
That your man hood did choose to roam
Why cause this pain? Why hide the truth?
Did you doubt i would find the proof?

You done it once, you made it twice
One girl never enough for you?
Why hide the truth? Why would you lie?
Did you think that i would not try?

You stole my heart too many times
I wish I knew you felt this way
My love for you will always be
The way it was when we first kissed
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One girl not enough?

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:52:17 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The broken ice of frozen tears
Tears that run down my gentle face
Why make them fall? why cause this pain?
Did you fear i may do the same?

You act as though it was my fault
That your man hood did choose to roam
Why cause this pain? Why hide the truth?
Did you doubt i would find the proof?

You done it once, you made it twice
One girl never enough for you?
Why hide the truth? Why would you lie?
Did you think that i would not try?

You stole my heart too many times
I wish I knew you felt this way
My love for you will always be
The way it was when we first kissed

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-04-20 14:52:17]
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Re: One girl not enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:54:30 PM AEST
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This is really good! I hope the best for you!

Re: One girl not enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:13:43 PM AEST
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Well done , i enjoyed reading it.

Re: One girl not enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:26:38 PM AEST
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ugh, i hate this whole feeling... wish i didn't have to remember it! good writing thou...
~Remy~

Re: One girl not enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:30:39 PM AEST
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great write. expressed your feelings well.

Re: One girl not enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:21:23 PM AEST
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Great emotive write, i could make this comment very assy and bytchy about a certain guy but i wont, you know my stance :)

Great write hun really stressed your feelings on the page, one of the reasons i find your writes inspiring and captivating

Luv, hugs, sandy beaches and squishy bugs

Luke xx

Re: One girl not enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:52:43 PM AEST
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Sadly some males have very low self esteem and one girl at a time is never enough for them. They go through life trying to prove their manliness only to end up proving what immature little selfish boys they are. Sorry, but a 30 year career and personal experience proved this to me. Good luck. If they do it once they will do it again and again and again. Don't fall for their lies.

Rita

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