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Array ( [sid] => 43988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Comments [time] => 2004-04-20 00:58:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Something sweet just
dropped
into my mind
thee innervision is illuminated
by Emystar light...
the dreamWeaver gently weaves
Lovingcritters lines relieve
and ah
Purgatoris words are kinda sweet,
Angelm helps me to hold on
venkats wisdom keeps me strong.
I got ah secret...

Sometimes i don't know what to do
i feel i am
waiting
waiting for something to do...
always wondering
what will i become
why am i so scared
to let anyone in
and just as i start to believe
i can't escape this prison
of misery
a sweet flow sets me free.
I got ah secret
comments...

Don't know
if anyone really cares
but a word here and there
can help someone
who is feeling low
the lines caress thier minds
with a gentle flow,
Ladyfawns words often ring a bell
Emystar always wishes me well
there are
so many thoughtful people
to lift you up
when you are falling.
Oh I got ah secret
comments
are lifting me.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

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Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:58:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Something sweet just
dropped
into my mind
thee innervision is illuminated
by Emystar light...
the dreamWeaver gently weaves
Lovingcritters lines relieve
and ah
Purgatoris words are kinda sweet,
Angelm helps me to hold on
venkats wisdom keeps me strong.
I got ah secret...

Sometimes i don't know what to do
i feel i am
waiting
waiting for something to do...
always wondering
what will i become
why am i so scared
to let anyone in
and just as i start to believe
i can't escape this prison
of misery
a sweet flow sets me free.
I got ah secret
comments...

Don't know
if anyone really cares
but a word here and there
can help someone
who is feeling low
the lines caress thier minds
with a gentle flow,
Ladyfawns words often ring a bell
Emystar always wishes me well
there are
so many thoughtful people
to lift you up
when you are falling.
Oh I got ah secret
comments
are lifting me.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-04-20 00:58:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Comments (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:02:31 AM AEST
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This is really good! I hope all is well! You have a great talent here!

Re: Comments (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:11:09 AM AEST
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Now this jus plane rocks!
Very creative u r.
It really touches ones heart, especially since I got mentioned twice. I feel honered.
More, please?
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Comments (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:16:46 AM AEST
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Awww this was so sweet.

I hope you get many, many comments you deserve them.

Kie

Re: Comments (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:43:01 AM AEST
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Nice. I wrote a poem like this a few days ago, concerning commentators and the general number of the poem I posted. I agree, comments life me, but to find someone has read an archived poem is just as satisfying, I think.
Good write.

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