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Array ( [sid] => 43981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY PLEDGE [time] => 2004-04-20 00:19:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => IN THIS LOVE OF
CONFUSSION
MY HEART WAS BROKEN
IN BEING USED
SHE TURN MY SOUL
DOWN TO DUST

PLEASE HELP ME
LEARN HOW TO TRUST
DON’T BREAK MY HEARTR
AND MAKE ME BUST
I WANT TO BE WITH
YOU AND PICK YOU UP
WHEN YOU ARE
KNOCKED DOWN

BABE GIRL YOU
KNOWI LOVE YOU
AND YOU ARE THE
ONLY ONE WHO CAN
MAKE ME SMILE
DAMN I WISH YOU
YOU WERE BY MY SIDE

I DREAM OF YOU EACH
AND EVERY NIGHT
BUT WHAT CAN I DO
YOUR LOVE IS SO TRUE

ALL I WANT WAS JUST
TO HOLD YOUR HANDS
AND TO BE MORE THEN
JUST A FRIEND BUT I DID
NOT KNOW HOW THIS WILL END

I LOVE YOU AND THIS IS
MY OATH I PLEADGE
TIL THE END
TILL THE END

Copyright ©2004 John J Makuer
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 24 [informant] => wed-dinka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

MY PLEDGE

Contributed by wed-dinka on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:19:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

IN THIS LOVE OF
CONFUSSION
MY HEART WAS BROKEN
IN BEING USED
SHE TURN MY SOUL
DOWN TO DUST

PLEASE HELP ME
LEARN HOW TO TRUST
DON’T BREAK MY HEARTR
AND MAKE ME BUST
I WANT TO BE WITH
YOU AND PICK YOU UP
WHEN YOU ARE
KNOCKED DOWN

BABE GIRL YOU
KNOWI LOVE YOU
AND YOU ARE THE
ONLY ONE WHO CAN
MAKE ME SMILE
DAMN I WISH YOU
YOU WERE BY MY SIDE

I DREAM OF YOU EACH
AND EVERY NIGHT
BUT WHAT CAN I DO
YOUR LOVE IS SO TRUE

ALL I WANT WAS JUST
TO HOLD YOUR HANDS
AND TO BE MORE THEN
JUST A FRIEND BUT I DID
NOT KNOW HOW THIS WILL END

I LOVE YOU AND THIS IS
MY OATH I PLEADGE
TIL THE END
TILL THE END

Copyright ©2004 John J Makuer

Copyright © wed-dinka ... [ 2004-04-20 00:19:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: MY PLEDGE (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:49:05 AM AEST
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i remember writing unabashed heart twinges like these, good writing... i like this one... ;0)
~Remy~

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